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"Lady of the Highlands"
  by ClasedruoL


Amidst the hills of green and earth
As the sun partakes of slumber
Gentle maiden, shall you arise?
Oh, hear the roars and thunder

...

Earth calls for thee, dearest lady
Beloved one, of the dusk-light skies
Thy name, exclaimed;
- beauty, proclaimed
By natures' moans and sighs


Earth calls for thee, dearest lady
Blessed princess, of dusk and dawn
Thy glory deemed divine;
- grace surpasses time
Over thee, spring forests fawn


Earth calls for thee, dearest lady
Beloved one, of the highland hills
Thy power, untamed;
- perfection, unmaim'd
Upon thee, soft raindrops spill


Earths calls for thee, dearest lady
Blessed princess, of eagle and dove
Thy offspring, aplenty;
- passion, heal'd many
For you, are natures' beloved

...

And the sun partakes of slumber
Amidst the hills of green and earth
Crimson rays fall upon this maiden
As she stands upon natures' hearth


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Date Submitted: Sep 17, 2008 (05:21 AM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (7)
  StraY12
12/10/08 (06:54 PM) 
Beautiful....I'm lovin' this one, I can really chill to the background, I can vibe to each word...and at the end that lil' photo...adds that sensation! "Earth calls for thee, dearest lady/beloved one, of the dusk-light skies" that just adds such a nice element when readin' this, keep writing!

  Swallowed Scro...
10/06/08 (06:40 AM) 
the images you used dear Reese are absolutely divine and surreal! i find myself wishing i was caught up by those ripples and carried off to wherever it might be...the colours are so befitting for the tone set by your words, such pleasant words of splendour and ardour *sighs* the beauty in which you painted the highlands lady is almost...makes me close my eyes and envision myself! that's how effective your words are accompanied by the images- such a beautiful mood you set...a place to escape to a...
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  LiquidFire
09/24/08 (01:38 PM) 
made me think back to those times when there was no technology and folklore was told at the edges of the fire. very descriptive and extremely beautiful

  Jody
09/17/08 (03:06 PM) 
this was tight... I read it twice and the language in this makes the piece very serene and poetic... lol, but she just to me seems like Mother Nature... she is beautiful or even just a person being greeted/awaken by our earth counterpart... nontheless I enjoyed and the bg is a really good pick. very nic.e

  touchdapearl2
09/17/08 (01:20 PM) 
It is so easy to get wrapped up in your poetry and lead about...so much fantasy and mystery and im a very curious person so its even easier,beautiful write

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