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"L3T M3"
  by ~* La Princesa *~


I’ve never seen you before,
Let me meet you.
I’m not a stranger anymore,
Let me learn about you.
Speak of you present and past,
Let me hear you.
Every word is better than the last,
Let me know about you.
We speak words again and again,
Let me understand you.
I am true to my friend,
Let me trust you.

But once in a while you’re a jerk,
Let me be mad at you,
It seems I’m the one doing all the work,
Let me hate you.
I’m never angry for that long,
Let me forgive you.
Maybe I’m the one who did wrong,
Let me apologize to you.

Once in a while you may be mad,
Let me comfort you,
I wish for you to never feel bad,
Let me help you.
I hope you have much success,
Let me be happy for you.
I wish you would express your sadness,
Let me feel bad for you.

You seem to be better every day,
Let me call you.
It’s hard to keep my hands away,
Let me touch you.
You seem to become more and more sweet,
Let me like you.
I’m going crazy with all this heat,
Let me want you.

You’re even smarter than I knew,
Let me learn from you.
I wish to know you through and through,
Let me love you.
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Date Submitted: Nov 12, 2008 (07:40 PM)
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  Re-Re
11/27/08 (12:31 AM) 
WOW!! This is really good...way better than my poems. My goodness, every word had me glued to the screen. Its soooo sweet, soo heartfelt, an actual scene thats played out in ur life wen meetin sumone. Excellent poem gurl

  poetriboi
11/22/08 (02:16 PM) 
I love this poem... im addin it as a fav and you gettin the 10 stars, well deserved..

  Brokenvegtable
11/22/08 (01:59 PM) 
this poem kinda seems a bit forced to me ...... i guess its the back and forth of the line before let me and then the let me line ..... althought the poem does have alot of conviction i just think i could have been more powerful if you had taken a different way about it ...... this is only my opinion and it should not be taken as i dont like the poem its just how i see it ..... the only thing that matters in writting is if you like your work ..... everything else is indifferent it was my honor t...
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  *~GHLJ~*
11/22/08 (09:02 AM) 
awww diis very sweet im feelin diis 10

  TRUE.POET
11/21/08 (09:37 PM) 
great write...keep it up ma...10 starz

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