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"L0V3 SiCK P03TR3$$"
  by ~* La Princesa *~


A lyrical serenade
and a plead not to fade

She caught his eye
he stole her heart

suddenly
they couldnt bare to be apart

they promised to stay
a shoulder to cry on

someone
who wouldnt fade away

She wrote rhymes with emotions
that he knew were there

sometimes being without her
was too much to bear

Her intentions
and emotions

fluttered before his eyes

placed in paraphrases
and rhymes

so he found the emotions
he so dearly missed

and he fell for a lovesick Poetress
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Date Submitted: Dec 03, 2008 (04:17 PM)
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  Ordained Misfi...
12/04/08 (09:11 AM) 
I felt like there should've been more, or maybe I just wanted the "serenade" to continue on forever lol

  YOUNG STACKZ
12/03/08 (05:20 PM) 
thats whats up ma nice right you did your thing right here on this one cant wait to read some more of your work 10 starz

  winniepooh22
12/03/08 (04:40 PM) 
this was so good ma, you got stle, and let no one tell you diffrent.

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