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"Kodak Moment"
  by B. Rose


Click Click Click - New Kids On The Block



Such a sight to see
Your beauty gently
Takes my eyes my socket
Because as of now
You are all I can see.

I mean damn...

If I knew you
It would be a completely different story.
Because I could call you
And devise particular venues and settings
Where we could meet frequently.

But
Since this is my first time seeing you
And your walking by quite swiftly
It would difficult to make that happen.

This moment...

Where you put my eyes in captivity
For a lengthened period of time
Because of the essence
Your beauty provides.

This is definitel a kodak moment
But I left my camera at the crib
So I cant capture this picture
Kind of makes me wish
Photographer was my job description

So I can take part in flashing and clicking
I keep this moment
Visually and mentally infinite
Everytime my eyes are glimpsing.
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Date Submitted: Nov 11, 2008 (02:44 AM)
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  LAB **Ms. Cool...
01/02/09 (04:08 PM) 
Kind of makes me wish Photographer was my job description So I can take part in flashing and clicking I keep this moment Visually and mentally infinite Everytime my eyes are glimpsing.<--- nice closing dude.

  soultrytongue
12/26/08 (10:59 PM) 
nicely done...i could imagine that alot of men may feel like this when they see women....lol

  Abz Bunny
12/17/08 (12:57 AM) 
another... good one from tha man.. i can dig it.. keep doing ur thang..

  unique1luv
12/04/08 (08:46 PM) 
Oh....very beautiful piece B. Rose.

  DaddysGirl
12/03/08 (08:09 AM) 
Very Nice- I'm a visual person so I can appreciate the sentiment here. The song is tight- good choice to compliment the message of your write.

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