i loved the flow and what was being said. it makes me think: we get so used to those deserving our disapproval that when someone cames along that is nice, we throw up our defenses, not being able to reveal who we really are, what we feel. i know this is humor but it really strikes up convo about a real social issue, even human issue because i think a lot of us have been hurt and reborn with an extra hard layer of skin. i am attracted to honest reality and this, even in humor, reflects it. great ... [+]more
i loved the flow and what was being said. it makes me think: we get so used to those deserving our disapproval that when someone cames along that is nice, we throw up our defenses, not being able to reveal who we really are, what we feel. i know this is humor but it really strikes up convo about a real social issue, even human issue because i think a lot of us have been hurt and reborn with an extra hard layer of skin. i am attracted to honest reality and this, even in humor, reflects it. great job! [-]collapse
haha I am loving this! Girl you knew I would, I'm saying can my moms join? She is of a similar mind frame right now. I told u before tho i really am not caring for this format. It just makes the poem look longer then it really is and makes it alot harder and takes alot longer to read. Kepp it comming!
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