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"KARMA"
  by ~~Miss K~Shine~~
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Karma by Lo Key


Why should taking care of my man be my #1;
When I loved you perfectly and stayed even when my wold became undone?
Karma is karma and we are all destined to get what we get
But don't try to make me feel guilty cause your ass wanted to be slick
Not too much bullshit can be pulled over my head
I just let it weigh heavy on my heart like a life vest made of lead
You are not dumb as a rock nor is your mind light as a feather
When you fucked bitch no. 1,2 & 3 you knew we were together
Now is not the time to be dumbfounded and lowering your head in shame
Pussy is Pussy...it has no face so it all feel the same
It's not hard to say goodbye, its just easier to say see you later
You felt like you needed more than one bitch for your needs to be catered
It wasnt about me accusing you or stamping you with a label
You were supposed to be my man...always ready, willing and able
"if he's not part of the solution, he's part of the problem"
Thats said by Mary. B. Morrison...my equation is a human and I am going to solve him
Face to face we stand and all you can say is Karmas a bitch
Be man enough to say you cant handle the pressure now that the roles have been switched
Say that you're drowing in a sea that is too thick
And you trying to find a way out...you need a way out and quick
You're destined to lose cause cheaters never come in first
Like that football player who's career ended, your situation becomes worse and worse
You should never live your life looking to carry on despair
Cause you gone wear that line thin and your female not gone care
To hurt you as bad as you hurt her from the start
you dont fuck with emotions and matters of the heart
Your life will become empty as if love was neva there
then what kind of Gangsta leave will you be forced to wear?
Game recognize game and misery loves company
But if you didnt see a future with me, you should have kept that seed that you dumped in me
Cheating is Cheating but cheating gets old
Its like an old record worn and torn but constantly being sold
The edges become frayed and the tune is is off track
It will never be as it once was...for it becomes past tense...and you can never get that back
So dont tell me about Karma; trust me I know what it can do
Because of the things I did in MY past...It was KARMA that brought me to YOU!

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Date Submitted: Dec 27, 2007 (03:12 AM)
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  ataraxia
05/09/08 (10:44 AM) 
You handled the last line, of the former poem, so now we are all balanced ! Nice work, Lady!

  Lo Key
12/30/07 (11:20 AM) 
mann...i'm like 3rd son what can i say after this one.....one hell of a response ya digg. no one and i do mean no one could have done it better. had me feeling bad like i fucked over u for real. make a nigga wanna act right. loved how u pulled lines from the original to make a strong ass point. though u deserve more i give u ten stars....well deserved. mann ....leaving very pleased!!!!!!

  .Always.Catali...
12/27/07 (09:37 AM) 
Damn if this wasn't the muthfuckin truth right here!!!!...Only Da Real Inc, does it again, lol...

  3rd Son
12/27/07 (08:52 AM) 
Wow what do you say to that if u home boy!?? lol MAN! this is just reality cut and dry! Straight truth just make u want to go out and fill out some applications, handle some responsibilities! LOL But in all seriousness I enjoyed this piece very well written. It has a even pace throughout that captures the emotion of what u were feeling. Im not sure how u can improve it but u message is felt!

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