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"Just you."
  by Ulises


The situation is critical,my explantion is inexplicable,
my patients is almost non existent but its still there
because I AM persistent,I've been consistant,my love for
you will never grow into extinction,
..tell me what must I do to be your heart's only assistant,
the distance shouldn't be the reason for us to keep resisting,

I'd climb any mountain just to grab a peak of you,
I'd sail many oceans just to lock lips with you,
I'd build a house just for you,with my own hands,sweat and tears just
to show you that my love is only for you,
I'd cook and bake for you,how do you like your stake?
I'm not trying to rush anything,
but these feelings are more then a crush,

I know you feel it too,
read my soul..
baby just hush..let my heart thrust deep in you
and I ain't talking 'bout a bust Im talking about US,
I'm ready to adjust my life,I want all of your trust,
don't leave me in the dust,I promise our love will never
grow rust,

when the time is right,when its just you and me,
we'll both fly high,
soaring in the breeze of our loves light,
forever and always the nights will be white,
I look at you and all I see is Paradise.
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Date Submitted: Sep 04, 2008 (08:18 PM)
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  Twinkle93
10/13/08 (08:32 PM) 
wow this poem is speechless. its incredibly good especially the last partttt. wow you should definitely publish this like in a book or somethin =]

  Debbie
10/02/08 (11:21 PM) 
yooo good job for real another real poet..MAY GOD BLESS YOU!!AND STAY STRONG

  lips.of.an.ang...
09/24/08 (03:14 AM) 
AWWWWWWWWW THAT WAS SOOO SWEEET ;( a zillion stars :D

  AR-15
09/13/08 (12:49 AM) 
Damn, even the softer writes are on point.. you one talented poet.. indeed..

  DaddysGirl
09/12/08 (08:12 AM) 
This is BEAUTIFUL! I absolutely loved this piece. I could really feel the sincerity and emotions invested in this write. Great Job. Most definitely a 10 for me ;-)

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