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"Just hold me*"
  by NICKY BOO


When im alone, and in need of help.
All i want is you to be there,
to have you to myself.
Your all i want, and all that i need
your the piece to my puzzle,
which happens to be incomplete.
One look in your eyes is better than a diamond ring,
Its YOU that i want,
Fuck material things.
Its killing me so much i just want you to see,
That i'll be all better,
When u come and hold me .
Hold me tight and dont let go,
tighter baby more, and please hold me close,
This feels so good,so good to me,
Damn why cant it last 4ever,
Stay here, its not time 4 you to leave.
As im laying in your arms
I hear a funny sound....
Hmmm...damn its my alarm,
After i turned off you were no where in sight,
Where did u go?
Still no sign...
So i lay here and just think, and follow up with a sigh.
Then i realize your gone,
The tears fell from my eyes.
I must have done something wrong, at least thats what it seems.
Damn wait a minute..NOT AGAIN!
Ive just been fooled again by another one of my dreams!
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Date Submitted: Jun 27, 2008 (11:34 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 08/24/08 (09:02 PM)
Author: NICKY BOO
Poem Title: Missing you can be d...

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comment icon  COMMENTS (8)
  CeeDee
07/27/08 (06:15 PM) 
wow thats was good i love it so its worth 100 starz butg i can only give you 10 lol so ten starz

  bookum
07/22/08 (04:22 PM) 
damn i like that..especially the end...real hot drop. ima fave this one.

  tootoo
06/28/08 (02:32 PM) 
i liked dis one alot 10 stars

  williesidney
06/28/08 (01:14 PM) 
GOOD JOB YOU DO KNOW HOW TO USE WORDS TEN STARS.

  Shortay_With_V...
06/28/08 (12:58 PM) 
woooow i loved this ima fav awww :D

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