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"JUST FEEL ME"
  by Lo Key
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Wow...Really? (also on page) by Group: The Spitterz


A. Shawnee

Its da boi Lo Key

Its only
Right
That I
Respond to ur piece

Its not just you…cause I for one agree
that GS poetry AINT what it used to be
Just a lot of BS and fake ass beef
But what u expect….just like the music industry

Some of its real but most of it is fake
See, me I used to put my life on the plate
Had my family…my wife and kids at stake
Posted my expressions didn’t give a fuck about a rate
Just said what I felt that I needed to say
Used to read shit in which I could relate
Needless to say that’s part of why I had to skate
Just felt like I was loggin on to myspace
To many youngins trying to pick up a date
Plus half these katz aint ever move no weight

Break

Is what I needed just to get back to me
Had to exercise my right to the freedom of speech
Let my inner soul leak
Cuz so many youngins would mis-understand the flo of the ink
But re-think….I preached about my life in the streets
If u haven’t “IF I COULD GO BACK” is a piece
u need to read….please
Cause I let my heart bleed
thru these computer screens
My place of restoration
The place I scream….and let go of childish dreams
But these beefs on GS is like a chop at the knees
For real writers who write real po-e-try

I dare GS to get back to the site that the poets fell in love with
When every other word wasn’t nigga or bitch
Somehow WE flipped the script
And I say WE cause I never excluded myself from being part of the click
Part of the glitch
in the system
Just speaking my mind and hopefully giving some wisdom
Hoping that u not just hearing me but somebody PLEASE LISTEN

If even from a distance
Cause I know this will fly over somebody’s head
.....damn…..somebody just missed him
Dismiss him from the rest cause I’m like no other
Big ups to Styles C …that’s still my brother
And if u never hear from me again
Just know that I love u
Just for being there when I needed
Ur blessing is coming
See…somehow I kinda fell off subject
But that’s the thing about poetry u gotta love it

Fuck it

No guidelines to follow
As I swallow
my pride
I stay true in my rhymes
so yall can never say that I lied

Forget it, I’m done…..and u can get ur rates up if u DISS ME!!!!!
And I’ll even rate, and comment on it with a “WOW…..REALLY!?!”

Just feel me!

Still Lo Key!


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Date Submitted: Jun 17, 2008 (09:05 PM)
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  A.Renee
06/23/08 (11:41 PM) 
wow, i lovin this, madd respect on this joint mos def a ten

  DamnBay
06/18/08 (03:40 PM) 
Yeah my boy i den fell off dis shit too as u can see but uhh...what a welcome home message in my inbox dat u got new shit posted... As usual u never leave me disappointed and my brain's thirst to read something mentally stimulating has been quenched!!! in other words...nigga dis wuz da shizznit!! I luv how u spit...fiyah everytime i know dat pen gots to be smokin!! I'm still a big Admirer...so for da sake of my own personal pleasure...keep dat pen flowin baby cuz my eyes never tire and my soul i...
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  --->ROXIE<---
06/17/08 (09:30 PM) 
U MADE A LOT OF VALID POINTS HUN....WONDERFUL RESPONSE....AND I CAN TELL U PUT A LOT INTO IT...SO GLAD 2 HAVE U BACK...1LUV

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