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" " just doing me ""
  by Steel94


( hey i wrote this write for school it's special cause it has a PREPOSITION in the beggining of each line this assignment was relly hard i did not expect it to be as difficult as it was with the skillz i have in writin poetry but i gotta hand it to mrs. Kelso she puzzled me for a minute i challenge you to try doin a prepositon poem !!!! )







- From my pen -
- To the ink that flows on this paper -
- Above me is only God -
- Cause I'm higher than a spaceship -
- Since I was a baby -
- Instead of suckin' my thumb -
- Inside my mind thinkin up rhymes -
- To rap to my moms -

- Untill I die I'm gonna' rhyme -
- With my friends -
- By my side 'cause they always -
- Down to ride -
- Within i know i trust them with my life -

- Along the road done been confronted with lots of tribulation and trials -
- But i make it through it with ease -
- As my head to the sky -
- Without a doubt there's gonna' be a smile -
- On my face like cheese -
- For your boy Steel don't fake i just do me -
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Date Submitted: Sep 11, 2008 (07:10 PM)
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  PoeticYungn
11/18/08 (08:46 PM) 
ha...very very creative...talented...10 all day...im feelin it

  REALKISSES
09/11/08 (07:21 PM) 
U DEF DID UR THING ON THIS ONE A TEN FOR SURE

  Twinkle93
09/11/08 (07:17 PM) 
baby i love this. you should present it in class 2morrow :] and yah Ms. Kelso always give us a challenge. haha best write i have ever heard. 10 stars. :] [that are twinklin] haha :D

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