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"Just Because..."
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7/24/08

Just because you're a devil does not make you evil

Just because you're immortal doesn't mean you won't die

Just because you're an angel does not make you Holy

Just because you're a "saint" doesn't mean you won't fry.

...

For devils are sometimes guardians

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And time ravages even immortal minds

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Angels hold potential for Falling

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And every saint has his vice...

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So the lesson within this fable

The point I'm trying to provide

Is to judge not a book by it's cover

For "even a devil may cry"

-DL Martin

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Date Submitted: Jul 25, 2008 (12:10 AM)
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  ComplexConfess...
09/18/08 (06:30 PM) 
This is undoubtedly, well said. In these few lines, you've summed up so much. I like how this write makes the reader's mind start to think in such a.. 'dark dreaming' like stance. That bit about your take on the gargoyles- definitely something to think about. I have to say though, this line.. "time ravages even immortal minds" ..completely gripped me. I guess, it somehow gathers the importance and the power time holds over all things. All that being said, what you were trying to say in this ...
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  RedLoveSong
09/17/08 (03:00 PM) 
You have a very interesting mind.....great delivery!

  LyricallyDamag...
09/07/08 (10:15 AM) 
Wow, I've read this poem many of times but when ever i try to comment I have nothing to say lol.. You've said it all. I just love your writing and this one was just simply AMAZING I personally find this poem inspirational because it shows that mistakes can happen within any range.. the pictures are a great effect.

  King.Shadow(Le...
09/03/08 (01:12 AM) 
most sincere write man.... very interesting and most detailed scribe and vivid images mah dude... most impressive

  ~* La Princesa...
08/19/08 (11:06 PM) 
you've left me speechless with this write. you gave a very powerful ending " the point im trying to provide is to not judge a book by its cover for even a devil may cry" omg! this write was...-SPEECHLESS. cant even say ten!

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