This is undoubtedly, well said. In these few lines, you've summed up so much. I like how this write makes the reader's mind start to think in such a.. 'dark dreaming' like stance. That bit about your take on the gargoyles- definitely something to think about. I have to say though, this line..
"time ravages even immortal minds"
..completely gripped me. I guess, it somehow gathers the importance and the power time holds over all things. All that being said, what you were trying to say in this ... [+]more
This is undoubtedly, well said. In these few lines, you've summed up so much. I like how this write makes the reader's mind start to think in such a.. 'dark dreaming' like stance. That bit about your take on the gargoyles- definitely something to think about. I have to say though, this line..
"time ravages even immortal minds"
..completely gripped me. I guess, it somehow gathers the importance and the power time holds over all things. All that being said, what you were trying to say in this piece came through clearly. Well written! [-]collapse
Wow, I've read this poem many of times but when ever i try to comment I have nothing to say lol.. You've said it all. I just love your writing and this one was just simply AMAZING I personally find this poem inspirational because it shows that mistakes can happen within any range.. the pictures are a great effect.
you've left me speechless with this write. you gave a very powerful ending " the point im trying to provide is to not judge a book by its cover for even a devil may cry" omg! this write was...-SPEECHLESS. cant even say ten!