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"Just A Dream"
  by DaddysGirl416


Was it all a dream?

Could it be, you were just a figment of my subconscious imagination

But it felt sooo real!

Overridden with false hope and unrealistic expectations

Just a fantasy?

No!

This can not be…

I am sure you were right here next to me

YOUR VOICE

The sound … so crisp
I heard your words not just with my ears but also with my soul
In my mind, your vocalized thoughts were entertained & brought to life
A language spoken amongst two hearts beating to the same rhythm
Clear & concise melodies emerged from your mouth and guided me to an audible heaven

YOUR TOUCH

So familiar & consoling
Fingertips stoking my spirit as keys to a grand piano
Being held by you made my world whole
Finally finding the completion I desperately sought after nestled in your arms
Relieving me of every worry & care
I released my grasp of the past and embraced a new beginning


YOUR KISS

This union was pre-destined by the most high
The sweetest taste I have even known yet our lips never met
Two puzzle pieces merging to finish a masterpiece
A perfect fit, fulfilling a void no other can occupy
Appreciating your unique flavor, made solely to gratify my receptacle

YOUR BREATH

Absorbing my very being and expelling love anew
Purified & cleansed by your lungs
Bathing me in your air
Flowing through me as a cool Spring breeze
Intoxicated by your presence
So refreshing & rejuvenating
Supplying me with the very substance I need to survive


YOUR VISION

You appeared before me flawless & ideal
Blessed to gaze upon such a profound creation
Picture perfect from head to toe
Seeing you with not only my eyes but also with my heart
A sight I attempted to capture mental pictures of to add to a scrap book of memories never to be forgotten
Behold, you are wonderful

It was all so clear
I am certain you were here..

Weren’t you?
Damn, maybe it was Just a dream…

A Dream - Mary J Blige

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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (2)
Date: 10/08/08 (09:29 AM)
Author: "Word$mith"
Poem Title: Confirmation of Love

Date: 09/26/08 (10:50 PM)
Author: KD the King
Poem Title: Made Love To An Angel

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comment icon  COMMENTS (22)
  cybersamm
12/17/08 (09:30 AM) 
you do what you do o so well an amazing read full of insight n passion

  Shaboobutt
12/01/08 (01:08 PM) 
damn if only I had this first... jk this is great

  Teen♥Mom
11/24/08 (10:37 PM) 
I hate that... when it turns out to be just a dream... shit even if it really happens it can still turn into just a dream in the end... this is gorgeous I wish someone felt this deeply for me! ten starz!

  PACERGIRL
11/04/08 (05:30 PM) 
Sometimes it's like that. Did you imagine the love or was it real? You have to catch yourself because sometimes you honestly don't know. You almost feel crazy. This really spoke to me. BEAUTIFUL! 10 stars don't do it justice.

  williesidney
10/25/08 (07:36 AM) 
Lady you are really good at what you do just keep doing what you are doing just keep doing what you are doing a big ten stars.

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