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"itsz okae"
  by * STiiCKY *
  - This Poem is a response to the poem No More Drama by L!L M!ZZ ST@XZ 313


itsz okae cutie you aint need that shit
a man that aint real aint worth yer love, not a damn bit

dont cry and dont feel bad
bcusz real love somethin we all wish we had

but not a damn soul can promise ta feel tha same way forever
some can but most cant, you have ta fight tha twist and turnsz and be clever
but i kno one thing you deserve better

you cute, smart, funny, sassy
and oh yae i almos for got you sure are classy

but you have ta fight yer fearsz and learn whosz gud and whosz bad
so you wont end up alone and sad

itsz all gud mama, if you want you can lay yer head here
close yer eyesz and relax yer mind gimme yer hand and ill steer

ill drive you down tha road uf love
and ill help you find yer angel from high above

but remember you too prescious ta be handled wrong
you shud live a gud life and stop singin that sad ass song

itsz okae mama itsz okae
bcusz im yer friend and ima do all i may
and i promise ill stay =)
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Date Submitted: Aug 12, 2008 (09:55 AM)
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  DOMINICANPOET
08/14/08 (05:38 PM) 
Awww such a nice response i can feel this keep em coming ten from me...

  cotton candy
08/13/08 (07:49 AM) 
awwh how cute sticky you have a crush on that girl dont you... ten star papi... keep it chill

  ~*!:.Br0wN-Ey3...
08/12/08 (10:59 AM) 
aWW..nOW dAS tOO fUCCIN sWEET =]..gREAT rESPONSE yO, lOVED tHE cONCEPT aND wORDpLAY iS oN pOINT..sIMPLY bEAUTIFUL..10 sTARS aND a fAVE..kEEP tHAT iNK fLOWING..|[ nICOLE r. ]|

  tamara843chuck...
08/12/08 (10:37 AM) 
i like this....this is soo sweet and beautiful write 10 starz

  DEBOMILLIONZ
08/12/08 (10:07 AM) 
good on ya cuz be true to ya words or the shawty you this too. you gonna be sittin there with ya ballz all blue 10

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