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"its you"
by KiNg-Go0B3r
- This Poem is a response to the poem
Moving Forward...I Guess Not
by
COMPLEX MENTALITY
no its just you thats
too afraid to let me love
you, you block me like
im a virus or
something, and no matter how
hard i try to prove
that i'm real you shut
me down completely with out
giving me a chance
im still not going
to give up on you because
your still in my heart
i won't leave you to
destroy your self by your own
dark filled attitude
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Date Submitted:
Jun 23, 2008 (08:40 AM)
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POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 06/23/08 (09:13 AM)
Author:
COMPLEX MENTALITY
Poem Title:
Just Go...
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COMMENTS (10)
FORESEER
07/04/08 (07:44 PM)
WOOOWHEW! "i won't leave you to destroy yourself by your own dark filled attitude." Some women are strong minded so dont hate her for it. Yet some women are just bitter and hateful period. I wonder which case this is?....lol. 10 stars....whats next
cody123
06/27/08 (03:30 PM)
love it 10 stars keeep the goood work up 10 stars and never give up
DOMINICANPOET
06/23/08 (01:21 PM)
damn deep ish no doubt son ten from me as usual keep em coming ten
krazy
06/23/08 (01:19 PM)
this was hot! i liked it! and i like the way ya'll keep going back and forth... it reminds me of me and rodriquez lol
DADDY RAGG
06/23/08 (10:49 AM)
Whoa now this was deep and truly felt dark filled attitude theres alot of that going on
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