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"It's the thought that counts ( for John S.Blake 4-29)"
  by Sum-Thyng like a Poet


I thank god for you cause
God did his thing when he had his thoughts of you
The second greatest gift he gave upon this earth
A wonderful smile when ever it peeks from behind the pain it which it’s hidden behind
A heart of gold
eyes that’s just beautiful like the story of the soul it tells
A laughter that make you wonder
How did I get the contentment of being in such good company as yours?
Arms that’s tender when they wrap you
like the angel wings that only open when needed
Hands that hold your hand with such comfort
And a voice that’s mellow like the playing of harps at heaven’s gate
I could sit and listen with no breaks
Legs that connect to feet that leaves footprints of kindness
And this makes up the BODY of some of the greatest enjoyment
My thoughts of you is how can God make something so magnificence
Someone that fills you with bliss so with a kiss and the last two words in this poem I say
Happy Birthday

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Date Submitted: Apr 28, 2008 (06:34 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 05/15/08 (01:12 AM)
Author: Searchin lyfe
Poem Title: Love Vs. Lust

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comment icon  COMMENTS (40)
  Nashali
01/02/09 (04:47 PM) 
Aww this is truly heartfelt and beautiful in every essence... I love ur word flow n style!

  Raw Sensuality...
12/26/08 (03:24 PM) 
this is so beautiful.... there's no greater gift you can give another poet than the gift of your words...for they value their own so much they have no choice but to value those of another...

  melita
12/20/08 (02:59 PM) 
Another good piece..I love your style and flow. What a wonderful gift to be honored in such a way..

  ~Unconcious Mi...
12/17/08 (01:41 AM) 
beautifully written and very heart felt...shows the person u truely care n how that person make u feel

  Gifted Pen
10/08/08 (03:25 AM) 
as i read, i pictured the scenes in claymation. i dont know why but i did and everything moved like rippling waves. great piece of work.

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