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"!!..It's Showcased...!!"
  by ...Da RiDdLeR F0rT...


** Humorous Haiku **

Just 'COMMENT' on time
Not 9 years later…But NOW...!!
!!....So… I’m impatient…!!


Need some FEEDBACK
Damn in 24 hours
!!...Not waiting 2 DAYS…!!


TYPE in quality
…Something full of Thoughts…Reasons…
…Judgments..Opinions…


Let me know WHAT’S UP..!!
!!..SPEAK…!! Good ..Bad or Indifferent
!!...It’s Showcased ..DAMN IT…!!

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Date Submitted: Aug 19, 2008 (04:38 AM)
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  African Queen
08/20/08 (08:21 AM) 
interesting topic.....i know how it feels yo..when people take their time when i know they will read but its frustrating at times waiting....nicely done yo!

  TRU-IN-DEED
08/19/08 (06:45 PM) 
quilty as charged lmaooo i ain't even gonna lie. At times i feel as if i put all my blood sweat and tears into a certain piece for it to only receive like5 comments? Nah lol but yea i can't deny i sometimes like certain pieces to get a lil extra attention. My only gripe is when people od with it like either they showcase a joint that allready has like 90 comments (well that doesn't bother me that much lol) but what really gets under my skin is when a poet has like 5 pieces showcased at the same...
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  LAB **Ms. Cool...
08/19/08 (03:28 PM) 
this was an interesting concept. lol, very truthful and honest. BUT I LOVE ME A SHOWCASE!!!

  SylenceThePOET
08/19/08 (02:44 PM) 
LMAO, you a fool, but at least you're honest my man.

  Blakfiya
08/19/08 (02:37 PM) 
lol....you not lying neither..lol. You captured my reasons exactly. I'm an impatient lady sometimes. I know people will 'eventually' get to it...but I wanna know now!

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