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"It's Over"
  by A..Po...ETic..sTaR


Sometimes things don't go as planned
8 years ago you were my first man
The love that I carry is solid as gold
Who knew
That it would end this way
Who knew
Love couldn't make you stay
Who knew
You weren't the one for me
Who knew
I was just to blind to see
All the time I put in
Makes me wanna cry
All the energy I wasted
Makes me wonder why?
All the sneaky things
I did that made me lie
The pain and the drama
That you took me through
Why did I ever even deal with you
It's hard to beleive
You bounced me like a ball
Once and for all
It's over!

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Date Submitted: Apr 11, 2008 (12:22 PM)
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  Baby LOca
08/20/08 (03:25 AM) 
hellz yea homita i loved dat one keep it up

  Dat Harlem Chi...
06/13/08 (04:33 PM) 
Short and sweet, thats the best kind and you really killed it on this one. i like it, and i can definately relate. just shoing some love, ~That Harlem Chic~ 10 starz

  Forty
06/07/08 (11:36 PM) 
Nice hott piece of work. Said what you had to say and got the hell on. lol. Once again you did ya thang. I'm lovin it.

  Sum-Thyng Like...
06/06/08 (06:48 PM) 
whew glad it's over grand write

  ugotpaper
06/05/08 (09:33 PM) 
I LUUV THIS SO REAL AND RIGHT 2 IT...FUK DA DUDE THEY NEVER KNOW WHAT THEY HAVE UNTIL WE SAY"FUCK DAT NIGGA"LOL...CC MUCH LUV MA

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