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"Its Me...The Bum"
  by D.O.X.


***Wrote This A Week Ago***

Its me….
The bum
Who lives in section 8 housing
No job,
Not because I’m lazy
But because I refuse
To be caught up
In the same cycle
That I’ve seen
My mother & others
Struggle through
While I was growing up
Going paycheck to paycheck
Investing their time & their efforts
Into companies that are not theirs
While others benefit
Meanwhile….they struggle
Coming home mad at the world
And taking it out on their children
Disgruntled, dissatisfied ….feeling unfulfilled
Yet continuing the same routine
Because its all that they know
But in the end, being left with nothing
This is not what I want for myself
Or for any whom I may bring in this world
And since they aren’t here yet
And its just me…
I take chances
While I try to build something
That in the end..will be more stable
Something I can pass on to the later generations
I endure the struggle
Because I know that its only temporary
And sure I may ask for help here & there
But not once have I complained about it
I move on, I continue because eventually…
It will pay off…
All the things that I’ve been setting in place
And even if I don’t
The priceless knowledge & experience
That I have gathered along the way
Can atleast be a foundation to someone else
So they wont have to follow the same route
Yes, its me
The bum
Who has chosen not to embrace the security
Of following the norm
Only to be made a slave
Instead, I chose the path less travelled
The one that no one else that I’ve known has gone
So that I may have a result that no one else I’ve known has had
Yes..the bum
Who has nothing in monetary value
To offer you…
Especially if that’s all that you seek
Yes, I can make material contributions
But not til I know that what you seek in me
Is beyond the superficial
And I’ve found none who fit the bill
Despite the many I have encountered
So those who scuff at me
Who turn their noses up & despise me
Are the very ones whom I choose to be apart from
So you do me no harm
Only favors
The bum
Values not,
Your fair weather accompaniment
For many can endure the sun
But few can endure the storms
The disasters, the perils, devastations
Turmoil, trials & errors
I seek those who will help build
not just reap the benefits of what was constructed
for they are many
but I only desire to partake with the few
for now…
I am the bum
By your standards
But I know
That I am not defined
By my situation
Or my circumstances
See I know who I am
But to you…
I’m just a bum
But the question that I have is….
Do you know who you are???



***LMAO@THIS REVOLUTION SHIT.....LIKE I'M TRYING TO MAKE A STATEMENT OR SOMETHING....SMH***
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Date Submitted: Sep 07, 2008 (11:06 AM)
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  Delores
01/07/09 (02:44 AM) 
I love that you spoke the truth. I respect that. D.O.X. you are def. talented. keep writing sweety. keep speaking your mind. XOxoDELORES

  Rosey
09/20/08 (05:49 PM) 
This was put together very nicely, loved how you expressed yourself, very well done. I'm sort of used to seeing the confrontational side of you so this was a change, very easy to take in. I feel you though, whatever works for you may not work for another. Very nice.

  lyric1985
09/20/08 (05:23 AM) 
i promise, babe, if i didn't know you, i'd probably think you were psychotic...truly realistic...but psychotic...love you 4 this piece. it not only forces me to stop and re-eval myself, but also to consider how i've also lost/gained by falling in line with society... 10 from mz lyric.... xoxoxoxox

  Shy Gyrl
09/15/08 (12:50 AM) 
But if u CARE for Y opinion...I dont think your a BUM...shooooo lol

  Shy Gyrl
09/15/08 (12:48 AM) 
thats one thing i always respected about your writing skills. you can come from any direction and just hit us across the face with yes as its called: a revelation. Shoot...not everybody that is looked upon as a bum is one. We cant judge unless we know the circumstances.....but lets be honest P...now u and I both know there are some pple that just dont want to do nothing with their lives because they have no vision or cant see a vision for the future....so what category do we put those in? Cuz I ...
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