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"Its Already Bleeding....B3yOnd R3d3MpTiOn...."
  by COMPLEX MENTALITY


Sitting here free flowin....shoulda never called you a friend....Look at the last three letters, it was destined to end....Couldn't give you much....so my hand I extend....How can I face reality....when everything around me is pretend? They say do you...so I do it myself...Attempting to drive, so I screw myself....Following the paths that I choose myself....If you don't mean it, don't say it at all....its like I tell you I'm trippin....and you say have a nice fall....Stop looking at the bigger picture.....dig deeper, switch topic.....get off it....Everybody thinks a newborn is innocent...but they came out of a hole....So they're seeing sex before they experience it...../The way you act, leads to how I react upon it....Okay, fuck dat...now I'm back on it....Questioning life only brings forth maybe's....Now you tell me....whats the bunch without the brady? Life can flash a little too fast....Weak people behind me like I'm stuck in the past.....I been hurt before, said that time would be my last.....But look where I'm at...reminiscing looking back....Thought I saw something bright....There it goes again, the maybe's and the might's....I was going, you made me stop like red traffic lights...A tribute to me....I'm thinking....should I fav it?...My childish instincts say you wrote it....so I hate it.....Listen, find out what ya wanna do....if you choose to love people, then its more than two....Could always stay solo, but then its just you.....Deal or no deal, I've been dealt a bad case....always wanted gold, never made it to first place....but I'm making it home....I'll never settle for third base....Mother birthed an ace...meant to be a cursed fate.... Shit turning dark like you pulled a night shift....But I never tried to see the light, in fear of being blinded....Tryna hear ya heart beat but you filling me with silence....YOUR WRONG, taking the right outta righteous......People tell me to fly, but I'm feeling kinda flightless....Niggas like you got me thinking since birth.... life or death....I don't know whats worse.....
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Date Submitted: Jul 09, 2008 (04:29 PM)
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  yoggypooh
08/19/08 (12:53 PM) 
WOOOOW IS ALL I CAN SAY YOU ON SOME REAL ASS DEEP SHIT MA FA REAL *1 LOVE BUT MUCH LOVE*

  Miz Candy Appl...
08/17/08 (12:30 PM) 
"Everyone thinks a newborn is innocent...but they came out of a hole...So they're seeing sex before they experience it..." <---- how that line is deep. you have such splendid talent with words. it was a pleasure reading this piece. keep that pen hot!

  Ms. Hollywood
08/13/08 (08:42 PM) 
haven't came across a lot of writes from you, that's partly because i'm never on long enough.. but wow, i can feel the emotion. don't you hate being stuck between a rock and a hard place? keep writing freely Poet!

  D.O.X.
08/12/08 (09:15 AM) 
your lines be ill ass hell....and it all just flows together....i wonder if u can really spit

  Lyrical StormŽ
08/10/08 (04:13 PM) 
That innocent baby concept is crazy. That's a nice poem.

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