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"It's A Calm Day"
  by *SaVaGe*


Its a calm day, sit back and relax
Sit down on ya bed, and lay down flat
Look up in the sky, and take a deep breath
Watch ya hair move by "The Breeze"
And the "A.i.R Smell so Fresh"

I think its time to calm down
It feels like the hole world, in my arm now
Take a second, stop and feel "The Breeze"
Circumcised Theses cats, Cut em off with Easy
Im so illimatic,Feels like "Nas" in the air
Spitten out flames, feels like my pen is a Flair
Pull up a chair and sit down, Cause I can do that
Im only fourteen bet none of you new that
The spitterz,heavy hitters I always got yall back
We been put togheter,like a girl weave track
Sit back relax, cause SaVaGe on the map
Lyrically insain,like some one mental to the brain with vocab
Im so fab,Im mean fabulous, and its so ridiculous
How I have the game on Hush
I don't smoke so you can pass that
Ive been ahead of the game, so yes I passed that

Its a calm day, sit back and relax
Sit down on ya bed, and lay down flat
Look up in the sky, and take a deep breath
Watch ya hair move by "The Breeze"
And the "A.i.R Smell so Fresh"

Im spinin like the inside of a cd
And I spit graphic, feels like its 3d
Yall been played out, like baggy pants
I’ve been standing out, like a appetence with no stance
Lets hold hands, ill walk you through the game
Ive been with AOL,im built with the aim
Yall still stuck, like a jammed locker
Fresh A.i.R been out, like fruit to the loom boxers
Im so straight, like my cuts every Saturday
So in love with my raps, they really flatter meh
Never sold "Coke",but flows were always classic
Always had save sex,no im not "MAGIC" (Basketball player)
It feels like I have no race
Cause all the girl like to taste,whats in my favorite place

Its a calm day, sit back and relax
Sit down on ya bed, and lay down flat
Look up in the sky, and take a deep breath
Watch ya hair move by "The Breeze"
And the "A.i.R Smell so Fresh"

They need me like some refreshing water
And im a rapist, so I advice you hide ya daughter
Im just playing, everyone calm down
Yea that one was unexpected,
like when the world trait went down
My life like a door Knob, at anytime it could twist
Nah my life is like a wrist,
cause it feels like im the one twisting the shit
My eyes lay on icons,im vicious like a python
But still I remain strong
See everyday should be a calm day
Never live in stress, or feel depressed get that shit off ya chest
Live ya life like that picture, when you first smiled
I don't care how old you are, Your still a child
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Date Submitted: Apr 16, 2008 (12:54 AM)
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  N3N3MACc
07/03/08 (11:18 PM) 
I NEEDA A CALM DAY

  Phinest
04/19/08 (08:16 PM) 
i love the punch lines u came in fa the kill fa real u can spit n u have a talent Bow Wow betta watch his back b/c u fen of take ova but keep writing n dont get distracted b/c u can go far

  Esoteric
04/16/08 (07:14 PM) 
i don't smoke so you can pass that, i've been ahead of the game, so yes I passed that............I like that. It's good to see that you promote positivity in the midst of your flow

  Demon of Darkn...
04/16/08 (08:13 AM) 
WOW MA BROTHA IM FEELIING DA BVIBES ON DIS PEACE.. YOU SPIT IS FIYAH.. DEPTH OF WORD PLAY IS REAL. VISUALS INDEED RAW...

  MiXmAsTaMaX
04/16/08 (05:18 AM) 
damn kid.. you continue to wow me with those fucking tight ass punch lines in your shit... it might be time to spit a new collab kid.... but anyway i am so feeling this shit tho.. good job lil brother

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