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"It Hurt Me Just As Much As It Did You"
  by Young Street Poet


Fifteen I was when you was like nineteen
I was stunting hard just because I loved the finer things
You had money too but I looked right passed that
Even now when I think about what happen I get flashbacks
Let's talk for a minute, Let's have a conversation
You was wet to death like we was making condensation
I never ever had to use protection with you
Faithful as could be I saw the best in you
But down the road things got complicated
First the headaches and then the stomach aching
One month no period, Two months no period
It was going on three months that had me curious
Eighth month arrived now it's close to the baby's turn
All of a sudden things took an unexpected turn
Labor room, I'm thinking the baby coming early
But then the doctor told me something that still continues to hurt me
No baby, It was a miscarriage
You had me ready for anything even marriage
After things happened you acted like it didn't hurt me
Eventually you understood but it still bothered me
You and I split separate ways neither one of us could function
I'm saying even though I'll never see you again I still love you
You understood me, you was smart, and you were beautiful
Our daughter would have been because that was my daughter too
If you never understand the pain and the suffering I went through
I'm letting you know it hurt me just as much as it did you
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Date Submitted: Oct 03, 2008 (01:36 PM)
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  lady phenomina...
12/22/08 (11:13 PM) 
WOW WOW DAM THIS WAS SAD AND EEP BEAUTIFUL PICE GREAT JOB NICE FLOW

  Niecty
12/16/08 (04:56 PM) 
...damn, i kno that a horrible feeling. i love this poem doe! Nii3CTY*

  Abstinence
12/14/08 (05:00 PM) 
well my friend well put thanks for sharing

  Moey
12/14/08 (01:33 AM) 
wow that was very heartfelt. i liked how you expressed your emotion giving ppl some way of understanding how u felt and still are feeling. sry u had to experience that.

  Mz. Crucial
12/13/08 (02:57 PM) 
very emotional, and sad, u expressed your feelings and pain in such away, i felt as if i were going through the same..10 stars

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