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"It Falls Apart"
  by mz_April


Tell me you love me,
tell me you care.
We pretend to be happy,
when were sinkin into dispair.
Our fake lovely world,
is fallin down around us.
Trying to hold it together,
not making a big fuss.
But we see it happening,
our loves just not strong enough.
We're mush on the inside,
with an exterior that appears tough.
We let people pull
and push us apart.
Changing into indivudals,
with two seprate hearts.
Theres nothing I can say.
Theres nothing I can do.
But send you on your way,
with my last I love you.

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Date Submitted: Dec 05, 2008 (12:22 AM)
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  mariposa2007
12/15/08 (08:59 PM) 
oh wow april this is such a deep and emotionally sad write.. keep your head up mija

  L-Dogg
12/09/08 (02:03 AM) 
damn april this is such a sad peice you'll be okay though just keep your head up

  B. Rose
12/05/08 (01:45 PM) 
Damn yo... this was really sad... but you have to know when its time to let go... when you know its a wrap...

  Lil Lexis
12/05/08 (02:38 AM) 
Been there definitely. Man. I didn't even get a last I love you yo.. It just fell apart.. sigh..

  Magic101
12/05/08 (01:02 AM) 
very well expressed and sad... you pour your heart into this piece.

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