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"Island showers"
  by ~Unpredictable Nature~


The setting....Phuket, Thailand at night
the sounds of the ocean whistles thru our window..

Steam stains the bathroom mirror and the glass shower.....
I stink my fingers under the water to check the temperature and remove my robe...
Stepping on the olive green marble-tiled shower floor I jump back because the heat is to much for my skin...
Stepping back under the relaxing shower head I grab the puff and lather it with some Victoria Secrets Love Spell shower gel...

The door is open but you choose to climb thru the that's position ova the bath tub...when you remove your robe and step into the glass shower to join me to become my company..

I can feel you nature rise as you rub him across....giggling.... I turn around to kneel down right in front of you, cross my arms around your legs and engulf all of him.....
Standing in the middle of the shower, you're reaching for things that are not present, but you can't seem to free yourself from this position I've position that I've got you in.....(lol)...
Letting go, you back me into the showers corner, grab my head and aim for the back of my throat...

As the moisture from my increases you begin to move a little faster..

Moaning and mumbling, you let out one of the first of three screams, but I'm still hungry for you as the once hot water is now lukewarm.....but...you still have me in this corner..

Unable to break free when I take him and his tow friends in my mouth, you let out the second scream and it is heard throughout the entire villa and now housekeeping is now knocking on our....but I'm not thru....as I grab your hips and pull you closer as you sway in and out of my mouth and now we've hit scream number three..

But when you scream this time, house keepin has now burst thru the door to see you laying halfway outside of the shower with the water still running...

Body laying lifeless with yo hand on yo chest and a big as smile on yo face, let's me know that you love this island shower...



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Date Submitted: Dec 04, 2008 (02:35 AM)
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  *Miss Toya*
12/09/08 (11:39 PM) 
wait a minute "Victoria Secrets Love Spell shower gel... " you know that's my shit right? LOL un your pen is on a sex spree!!! "Letting go, you back me into the showers corner, grab my head and aim for the back of my throat... " *wide eyes* Girl bye!!!! very nice!!!!

  Ms. Sincerious
12/05/08 (01:35 PM) 
UN.. you were feelin.. kinda.. lusty yesterday huh?? lol.. this was dope tho.. it really was..

  B. Rose
12/04/08 (01:44 PM) 
yeah theres WAS a lot of screaming but thats okay as long as its from pleasing yo... nicely done..

  XPERIENCE
12/04/08 (03:43 AM) 
damn that was dope..... a lot of screaming going on in this muthafucka lmaooo...very sexy joint here.... kinda like a short story.... loved it..

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