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"Is Love ready for u?"
  by DIZZLE
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Ready for real love by Quash


Ready for real love, u been waitin 4 a minute
Find yaself lookin for it trynna put yaself in it
but remember love aint really somethin that can be rushed
and if it so happens, thats when a delicacy is crushed
been there, done that, felt tha pain n tha struggle
jumped n, fell down n tha dirt n tha rubble
Dusted it all off, and now i've learned to be patient
though sometimes i really dont know how long imma b waitin
and chasin is n ma ature so patience i was taught
after adjustin to the concept, couldnt believe what i fought
temptation and what not, it's all gon happen
n dancin around da issue is somwhere along that path
I mean u searchn find what u think is real,
yet you find yourself left wit so much time to kill
the real thing comes whan u least expect it to
so instead of chasin n lookin 4 it, let it come to u
the rest will come wit time, somtimes u gotta sit still
cuz not knowin how to find it means that u soon will
an abstract concept but it happens to tha best of us
ready for real love, aint no different from tha rest of us
but we on tha same page so keep ya hope strong
keep ya head up cuz lack of love aint gonna last long
when u see that love is closer than u think
i promise when u recognize it you'll find it in a blink...
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Date Submitted: Oct 25, 2008 (01:36 AM)
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  Miss Self Suff...
11/07/08 (04:11 PM) 
WOW..this was great! we must get together on one! get at me..

  Quash
10/27/08 (03:32 PM) 
OMG! THe wordplay was great Dizzle...where has this poem been all my life! It hit home to fullest capacity! I loved every word of it. I'm glad you got inspiration from my poem, makes me feel good. We gotta collab, there is absolutely no way around the issue...WE GOTTA COLLAB! Great stuff...great write!

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