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"Is it me"
  by BlakkStarr


hold on where you goin
why you packin your things
why givin back my gifts
why you leavin tha ring
im confused whats seems to be
this is remindin me of avants song
i hope i got more
than 4 minutes to talk
i hopin i can persuade you
not to walk
out that door
but im not sure wat to say
since i dont even kno
why you leavin anyway
i mean, im sayin
well...im not really sure
i mean are you feelin sick
is seperation tha cure
im just not posiive
wat i can be
tell me tha trut baby
is it me

to be continued
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Date Submitted: Aug 14, 2008 (01:08 AM)
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  --->ROXIE<---
10/18/08 (06:15 PM) 
=( THIS WAS SAD....BEEN HERE BEFORE....

  layzome
08/15/08 (12:54 AM) 
i really want to see what happens next great write 10 starz dum ...dum ...dumm.. drama... lol

  cotton candy
08/15/08 (12:50 AM) 
i hate when a girl/guy takesz everything you worked for and made... itsz not fair that they can just knock it all dowm but thatsz life it giivesz usz another chance ta build it back up with someone else... maybe in time thingsz will get better =) ten starsz cutie

  * STiiCKY *
08/15/08 (12:40 AM) 
wow we can all relate ta thisz a some point... easy ten and a fave

  Ticole
08/14/08 (10:21 PM) 
wow......dats crazy

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