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"Invisible To The World"
  by Nick


When I'm hurt I look down, and everyone looks but
they don't do anything to that long frown. When I begin to cry,
no one helps or even bothers to try. When I am injured or when
I am near death, people don't do anything but just breathe their every breath.

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like I am nothing, and no one cares to show me that I am worth something. Feeling the pain that kills me on the inside, and as I've always tried its
like my mind has only lied. Thinking I can go on, tryna be tough, strong enough, but then I just come to realize that that I don't have the right stuff.

This world wasn't meant for me, or what they would think probably because
I know no one seems to care, and I don't really care either. And yet it burns like someone really turned up the heater.

The feeling of

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and feeling the sorrow of being

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while my shoulders ache, and my body feeling all the

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I thought I was a champion, I thought I was gonna be the king. Then I had a wake up call, that just said "Wake Up! Your Gonna Fall". The pain hurts overall, and I know that I need to be stronger, but let me just face it, I don't belong here. I am invisible to the world, because when I'm down, No one notices. And if they see me, they look at me questioning my purposes.

I am not the perfect person, but it hurts to know that I am no where to be

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by the light of the world.

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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (2)
Date: 08/25/08 (09:48 AM)
Author: Nicholas C.
Poem Title: The Invisible

Date: 03/05/08 (07:02 AM)
Author: Group: Defining Poetry
Poem Title: Invisible To The World

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comment icon  COMMENTS (35)
  Deandriah
12/05/08 (02:03 PM) 
That was a very excellent write. i loved the emotion behind it all. this was deep and i feel you on it. 10 from me

  Nilla
11/16/08 (01:43 AM) 
fuck what the rest of the world doesn't see. i know what i see. i see someone WORTH something. believe that. this piece was EMOTiONAL as hell, NiCKi BBY. *frowns* need to talk?

  Moey
11/14/08 (11:25 PM) 
that was great, real deep. I liked how you expressed yourself in a way that made readers understand where your main point. Great write. Keep it up! 10 stars. ~Moey

  OGSoldier4God
11/12/08 (05:10 PM) 
What A Beautiful Write! So Often I Feel Like That! On GS You Are Seen!

  Princess Mia
11/09/08 (02:58 AM) 
Oh this is definitely going to be a favorite for me. I am feeling this one. Your verbage and word play is incredible. The form of your poem itself pulled me into it emotionally. 10 Stars!

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