Uhmmm yea the words are trapped in my mind, caught in a net of complete awe! Sadness as a beautiful entity! Who knew! This was deep I mean I can't even describe the feelings envoked in me by this. Miss mamm you are fire!

damn, this is so deep and beautiful. I truly enjoyed it and great song choice. The line that sticks out most for me is "opposed to all conforming ideas of strengh" you are absolutely right b/c when do we ever see a posture like this as the image of strengh but this is strengh! to be able to cry is strong! I would call this piece a masterpiece. Love it!

its sooo elegant and lovely my FAVE...nice piece grly...keep em coming 10

Leaf, this was classicly beautiful.. pure and innocent poetry with short with so much depth in this... sweet misery

Sadness never so beautiful She moves with such grace Flowing like silk Tears falling like stars i am feeling this write 100 percent -- thanks for a nice write my poet