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"Intractable"
  by Smirnoff


A tale never told
A soul never sold
A life never lived
A dream thats getting old

Down on my knees
Hands on the ground
Head hanging low
But my thoughts keep spinning around

Like a tornado that never sleeps
A hurricane that never dies
Causing intractable damage
When all I see is your eyes

I try to let it all go
And watch as the wind makes it fly
Much like you let go of me
And just let me fall and die

A funny way of saying you love me
Or atleast saying you tried
Makin me feel as though I never mattered
Not even a second glance when I cried

Every lonely day
And every sleepless night
Are taking a toll on my head
Where my mind and my heart fight

Maybe I've finally lost it
Or maybe it's lost me
Or maybe its just the fact of life
That nothing comes for free
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Date Submitted: Sep 25, 2008 (04:07 PM)
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  BoySoDef
12/18/08 (11:06 PM) 
yo mami...gansta write...yeah this was a hot one..keep doing you mami...10

  JokerJay
11/14/08 (04:30 AM) 
yeah, nothin' comes for free. that's why you gotta take what you can and give nothing back. great write

  Ulises
09/26/08 (01:42 PM) 
Very strong,your words carry so much depth,I can kind of relate to with this,well written ma, definitely a 10

  kinnaird
09/26/08 (11:31 AM) 
a spider-web of emotions. a girls hurting heart and conflicting emotions. an expressionist piece.

  MurkBoi
09/26/08 (11:21 AM) 
So true and I can see the raw emotion behind your words and the pain the your heart's constantly battling and how it's trying to seek freedom from the pain and I commend you for being able to put it in words to give people a visual picture that is speaking louder than words nice write ma 10starz

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