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Jones had a write that he allowed others in the group to revamp.
This was my version.
Much love Jones.. you inspire :)*
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He
heard my soul
singing...
"Come inside me"
and
from
inside me
my heart
softly
swooned
slowly
sedating
yet
celebrating
heart
beats
coming out
of hiding
...
It must have
been the
tick tock
of
loves clock
second handedly
serving us time
to grow
...
So
while
the others
do them....
We busy
becoming
high
&
mighty
beings
rapidly
releasing
&
sleeping
forgetting
to say our
prayers
because
we are
already
blessed
...
hymn
like
seductive serpent
through
the night
lingering
around
like long
"ohs"
&
"ahs"
drunkenly
indulging...
reheating
&
drinking
me
over
&
over
again
...
My mind empties
when he kisses
my lips
setting me
ablaze
like
wild fire
mindlessly
writhing
beneath he
Glad to see this here, Candice. Power poet, you honor me. So glad to see how well you wove the concept, how deftly you chose the words. I like yours much better than mine. It's got that woman's touch on it now. Thank you for the blessing, sweetheart.
Very nice work poet. Mos def did ya thing on this one. This piece had a deep sensual feel to it. Makes ya wanna just lay next to that other person and watch the moon from where you lay ya dig. Love this piece. One love.
wqhew...that was an extremely sensuous journey. Very intense sensations spoien of here. This really spoke intensely to me "My mind empties
when he kisses
my lips
setting me
ablaze
like
wild fire...." The portion about forgetting to say your prayers because you were already blessed hit hard too. Very nicely done.