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".Inside."
  by .candice.


Inside My Love - Minnie Riperton
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Jones had a write that he allowed others in the group to revamp.
This was my version.
Much love Jones.. you inspire :)*
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He
heard my soul
singing...

"Come inside me"

and
from
inside me

my heart
softly
swooned
slowly
sedating

yet
celebrating

heart
beats
coming out
of hiding
...
It must have
been the
tick tock
of
loves clock
second handedly
serving us time
to grow
...
So
while
the others

do them....

We busy
becoming
high
&
mighty
beings

rapidly
releasing
&
sleeping

forgetting
to say our
prayers
because
we are
already
blessed
...
hymn
like

seductive serpent
through
the night

lingering
around

like long

"ohs"
&
"ahs"

drunkenly
indulging...

reheating
&
drinking

me

over
&
over
again
...
My mind empties
when he kisses
my lips
setting me
ablaze
like
wild fire
mindlessly
writhing
beneath he

leaving me
never knowing
when to
say

-stop-

because
I wouldn't
want it to...

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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 07/11/08 (05:38 AM)
Author: *Candice*
Poem Title: .Inside.

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comment icon  COMMENTS (9)
  Jones
07/10/08 (10:36 AM) 
Glad to see this here, Candice. Power poet, you honor me. So glad to see how well you wove the concept, how deftly you chose the words. I like yours much better than mine. It's got that woman's touch on it now. Thank you for the blessing, sweetheart.

  LadyMay16
07/10/08 (10:18 AM) 
Oh lawd I love this side of you bunny lady...sweet, open, carefree. This poem was definetly crazy sexy cool.

  TonySouthern
07/10/08 (09:31 AM) 
Very nice work poet. Mos def did ya thing on this one. This piece had a deep sensual feel to it. Makes ya wanna just lay next to that other person and watch the moon from where you lay ya dig. Love this piece. One love.

  LAB **Ms. Cool...
07/10/08 (09:28 AM) 
reheating and drinking me over and over again. . . forgetting to say our prayers because we are already blessed. off the chain.

  mindigoblue
07/10/08 (07:59 AM) 
wqhew...that was an extremely sensuous journey. Very intense sensations spoien of here. This really spoke intensely to me "My mind empties when he kisses my lips setting me ablaze like wild fire...." The portion about forgetting to say your prayers because you were already blessed hit hard too. Very nicely done.

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