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"Inhale...Exhale...{partII}"
  by pRÖdîçÅLSôn² 


I awake...

...

...

...


To find myself shackled in a room full of mirrors,
In a hospital bed,
Darkness is perpetual,
My eyes are wide shut,
I am standing in still motion,
My mind is frozen,
In an ocean of parasitic emotions,

Inhale...

Exhale...

I hear a door knob turning,
The door squeeks open,
The hooded man enters the room,
I still can not see his face,
I hear foot steps,
He turns a light switch,
Theres blood every where...

I am scared,
But i know there is no one there to save me,
And i can not get mad at no one,
I can only blame me,
For it was I who ran away from my problems,
Instead of facing them,
I always put my dreams aside instead of chasing them...

Now I am laying here stuck,
With my life on the line,
This hooded man is walking up,
He says its my time to die,
He starts getting a little closer,
Now I'm screaming for help,
I yell, "GOD help me!"...

The hooded man is standing over me,
I scream "GOD please help me!",
The hooded man says, "Dont worry i wont hurt you",
I cry out "Please!",
The hooded man unshackles me from the table,
Removes his hood and falls to his knees,
I can't believe this whole time,
The hooded man...

...

Was me...

...

As the sun suspend in the air,
I have to stop and take a deep breath...

Inhale...

Enhale...

Because I have come to the reality that,
This world that I live in,
Does not actually exist...
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Date Submitted: Oct 19, 2008 (02:56 AM)
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  DeeDee8908
11/30/08 (11:35 AM) 
GR8 CONTINUATION VERY WELL XECUTED 10+

  Buffy
11/14/08 (09:12 PM) 
bro this was freakin tight a story painted in my mind and hard to eva forget!

  kemistry
11/09/08 (06:37 PM) 
damn! I....I really have no words! every time it said inhale....exhale I did just that! wow super great job

  0g'Shynj
11/09/08 (06:30 PM) 
i agredd with edeezy..this was so vivid..u allowed me to picture what was goin on..and if anyone is able to do that...they got true talent..i love this...10 starz

  Lov3M3L3@v3M3@...
11/07/08 (07:42 PM) 
i dnt even know what to say about this because this was one hell of a story.. i never would have thought it would have turned out like this.. you are a very creative person cause this just beyond amazing.. 10 strz and a fav

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