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"infinity"
  by Shortay_With_Vision
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Endless by stayfocus3d


I need more then one witness
My hear keeping on increasing
And the love you’re sending keeps on
Speeding
I keep getting
Higher and higher
Till I am flying
Non stop
Out of space
Not with the time
Nor am I counting the days
Its forever going
And I bet the increase is showing
Continuing
……………..
…………………………….Continuing
Infinity years love so great
That infinity seems short
And death is not powerful to put a stop to love
Because it’s a spirit that can never be touched
My Love keeps on speeding..*oh god*
still not out of breath
Continues love …..
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Date Submitted: Jun 11, 2008 (12:28 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 06/24/08 (10:15 PM)
Author: KiNg-Go0B3r
Poem Title: ETERNITY

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comment icon  COMMENTS (7)
  Ladii Breeze
06/28/08 (09:23 PM) 
it's good, once again work on your flow, but I like this. It's nice.

  AR-15
06/24/08 (11:06 PM) 
Very well expressed, loved how smooth this write flowed captures a deep insight of deep love. Interesting piece right here

  KiNg-Go0B3r
06/24/08 (10:05 PM) 
mmhhmmm im feelin it i lovws ya word play and concept it really brought out ya talent

  DJ-GZeus
06/24/08 (09:44 PM) 
wow...I had to read this poem twice to fully get it, but I gotta say this is a great short piece....I enjoyed the level of emtion that showed through this piece ma...nice write no doubt....

  ~Me~Me~
06/11/08 (04:01 PM) 
this is real good has a real good flow to it an everything its goin in my favs i give u 10 starz

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