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"In Too Deep"
  by Lisa20


I'm so in too deep the glare in your eyes sets a flare in my soul. The touch, the kiss of your makes me too weak to meet. I melt into your arms, I fall so deep into your existence. Body full of flame as I watch you go by body releases heat as I feel you close by. Words cannot explain such a reaction, I just know that your causing a reaction.

As you lay I watch the purness of your face, the softness oy your head and dream into the day we will be wed. I can't resist such a feeling I'm in too deep and want to float to cover. The presence of you must forver go on. As the water flows, my love goes in too deep,

The way my lover knows.
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Date Submitted: Aug 20, 2008 (10:36 PM)
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  Miss Self Suff...
12/31/08 (01:07 PM) 
aww this was a great write ma! you expressed yourself really good in here. he's lucky to have you.. 10*s

  TMASON
12/30/08 (03:44 PM) 
I LIKE THIS BECAUSE U DEF. MAKE A PERSON SIT AND THINK ABOUT A SPECIAL PERSON AND THE INFLUENCE THEY HAVE ON U I LIKES

  Sie7e
12/28/08 (09:17 PM) 
You know how to write with the greatest sincerity. So far everything i read from you invokes a passion in the write. Which is without a doubt your strong point, Keep on throwing them out there.

  enjay
12/22/08 (10:03 PM) 
i love dis poem 4real....itz short, yet so deep and interestin 2 read....gotta give u a 10 on dis 1 4real...stay up...ghost

  ~*~QU33N~MA3~*...
12/06/08 (03:41 PM) 
i love it!! this is reminds of me and ma hunny dyp!!! i am def dyggin

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