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"I'm dat Chick"
  by Miss Self Sufficient
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Ms. Lady: The Epic Poem Pt 2 by Prince of War: King of Pe...


Did you forget to add..the way you gripped this ass
The way you held my cheeks as you glided from the back?..This is what you call a true nigga one whom come thru take care of bizness and does the dew.
The one i don't mind calling back for action out the blue.

Papi...you basiclly done put my bizness out there cause it was with me you were with, i'm daddy's girl, feeling new to the world..you named it to the T..

But i must admit that 10 inch got me going , got me spitting some shit got me flowing.
Got me hiding, fighting shit hell...to be honest im shinin.
you layed it down and yes it was great..
can you please remember how i yelled Papi dis your shit.

Just remember that my body is your home and you can come upon
As you ready to leave, i pull you back...i sucked it up to a hard on

Here we go again..this time on the floor by living room table..
Can you manage another round, tell me are you able?..

Fuck that..
he's hard and i am getting it again..
sorry papi..im sort of persistant
Always on point, always consistant

Again we sweating, moaning..
you pulling my hair got my neck aching
Oh damn babe..please know
that this here is not foresaking.

When you need me call me hope that your near
Don't trip boo...please come let me whisper in your ear...
Just remember... Your future woman is here
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Date Submitted: Nov 18, 2008 (05:40 PM)
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  joed
11/21/08 (01:42 PM) 
damn

  revolt
11/21/08 (12:50 PM) 
ok lol lol hotness.

  PHILLY PRINCEZ...
11/21/08 (12:25 PM) 
allrighty than GOTDAMN

  Prince of War:...
11/19/08 (11:58 AM) 
Hmm...I wudn't rather have any1 else 2 respond 2 this 1...Now, the ? is...How much of it is Fact? U know where 2 find Me...Nicely Written...!0 StArZ...

  H.H. Holloway
11/18/08 (09:20 PM) 
Naughty Nightingale!

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