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"I got one too"
  by Miss Self Sufficient
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Yeah, I Got A Tongue Ring... by Prince of War: King of Pe...


First of all, imma start off by saying...
that i have one too
Before i left you feel mine,
you gotta show me what yours dew

Spread my legs and work the middle
Got my legs shaken as if it was a fiddle

Got me moaning, gripping I ride the tongue
Damn pa...i like the chemistry its so much fun

I'm cummin, you pull your face deeper
Oh yes, you's a damn keeper.

I ain't never been ate like this before
damn i just reallized we on the damn floor..

Whelp...i came and enjoyed every minute
Get right here boo you finna get it!

This RING you will now feel..

As this ring twirls around your head
I deep throat like i just been fed

Some of this good dick..yummy precum all drippin
Taste good daddy i see you gripping

I grab the balls, as i stoke the dick
My tongue just got you going soon i'll ride the stick

i got the head gripped with my lip
You coming as your dick i tip


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Date Submitted: Nov 19, 2008 (01:07 PM)
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  TWANGINU
11/25/08 (10:33 PM) 
WOW..YOU ARE SO FREAKY LOL...THIS IS A VERY NICE WRITE...10 STARS KEEP DOING YOUR THING

  PHILLY PRINCEZ...
11/21/08 (12:21 PM) 
woooooooooooooooooooow! is all I can say mamas

  Tha Scorpion
11/19/08 (08:38 PM) 
Oh really now, well I wanna see just how good you can work that baby!!

  Leo the Liones...
11/19/08 (05:43 PM) 
oh shit. thats all i can say with being inappropriate lol

  Quite
11/19/08 (03:55 PM) 
damn baby sexy ass write ur 2 much mama damn lol

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