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"FUCK YO STRUCTURE! (I'M FREE)"
  by *ROXIE*


I'm the illest dictionary-less diction SPITTER.
In no way does that make me any less profound.
It just means I want yall 2 understand me quicker.

Can't stand tryin' 2 decipher quotes.
Using thesauruses, foot notes and cliff notes.
If it flies over my head then maybe it wasn't meant 2 be caught.
Fuck a structure...I relate 2 poetry that's self taught.

Tell me how chasing syllables equates into poignant lines?
I'll take mines straight up...exposed... instead of hidden in confines of minds.
Yes...my shit always rhymes cuz I'm tryin 2 make my words 2 step out of the dark.
I'd rather change the pace in the beat of Ur heart...
Instead of u tryin 2 pick my analogies apart.

U can call it dumbing down...I say I keeps it simply stupid...
Not that I'm metaphorically moronic...my flow is just idiotically ruthless.
Not into poetic dick suckin'....u tryin 2 gag me with that verbal semen shit...
Trust Roxie never swallows...Bitch I just spit!!!

I'm long winded and my thoughts run rampant all over the page...
Blame Maya Angelou and Jigga 4 lettin this poetic beast out of it's cage...
My rhymes are the shit that should be penetrating thru Ur speaker box
I gets my love below the ground...I make b-boys break out they socks...

I'm the Van Gogh of rhymin cuz I know my shit is only felt by partial ears...
But I'll be embedded as legend when my style is recycled after I enter my afterlife years...
Tired of muthafuckas thinkin they flying lyrical light years ahead of me.
Actin like they pen is the be all end all of the entire BIC factory...

"Just cuz i don't understand u, don't mean that u nice"
"Just means I don't understand all the BULLSHIT that u write"

^^Take that Hova quote and deep throat it slow until the shit makes sense
Or until I can make sense of all the shit in the lines u try 2 condense
Just cuz I dont write a Haiku or Sedoka...
Don't mean my words won't grab a hold of Ur heart and choke ya...

See...conforming 2 rules... it just aint me...
I say what the fuck i want in how many lines I want...
Fuck a syllable count cuz a bitch like me just gotta be FREE!!!!



Free (Instrumental) - Freeway


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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 08/21/08 (11:32 AM)
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  Lil Knuck Knuc...
10/23/08 (04:30 PM) 
Dis poem iz beautiful nd i feel evri wurd dat ur sayn it all makez perfect sense. 10z itz fukin awesome.

  J Dog
10/22/08 (10:38 AM) 
Damn this shit is sick man. holy fuck keep it up man

  Bestever
10/20/08 (08:54 AM) 
Uhhh, and they call me cocky? Well, i love how u write. Jay said, " Do you listen to music or do u just skim through it?" I feel that is how ppl read sometime. some ppls shit give me a brain freeze cuz first, it dont rhyme and i cant tell their direction...(not saying it has to rhyme though) Hate to knock ya boy, but its not cuz we beef, but B rose sucks to me. I wld give him props but i simply cant. HE HAS NO DIRECTION WIT HIS SHIT. and i have tried to read and see wat he about.Anyways, u r th...
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  Rissa14
10/19/08 (06:14 PM) 
wow girl you are soo lyrical and you jurt keep your flow on point the whole time. its like..reading this piece and any of your other pieces, i can imagine it being performed and spit on stage..with the realest passion and the sickest emotion you get me. ten stars and a favorite. keep up the good work seriously. xoxo ♥Rissa

  KITTY
10/08/08 (07:42 PM) 
YO THIS IS ILL , YOU SPIT REAL.

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