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"Friends?!?"
  by .Candice.Renee.


Deep Fried Frenz - MF Doom


Song made me think.



Friends?!?

more like
leftover enemies
turned upside down smiles
smiling in faces wishing to trade places

Friends?!?

nah just hypocritic
mud slangging
loose lip hanging hoes
too scared to have someone
as vicious as me as a foe

Friends?!?

Ha!
helping hurt having hidden agendas
making miracles being indian givers

stop fucking with them

items given yesterday
will be requested to return to sender
making you understand better that phony
bitch was nothing more than a pretender

Friends?!?

fucking fraudulent
feeling so smart
playing so dumb
having hardy har hars
full heartedly when you fall
faking sympathy
sinfully
swearing for your better days

motherfuckers are yall shitting me?

Friend?!?

Nah... I don't have any...

I fucks with family.


*What I mean by family... I mean that the people who yall call friends.. are
more than just a friend they are my fam... people who I can trust and know wil have my back and love me for everything that I am... and are beyond anything that I wrote in this poem...
Watch ya friends

They tricky*

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Date Submitted: Aug 19, 2008 (04:29 PM)
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  Esoteric
08/20/08 (05:03 PM) 
that friend word is used to lightly these days....I can relate to everything you said in this write...It's a trip that a 100 people may call themselves your friend but when shit gets thick (in real situations) only about 3 out of the 100 really got ya' back. and i've learned that everyone that is related to me by blood is not my family because some of them are just as bad as the "friends" Fucked up ain't it?.......fav

  juicy2007
08/20/08 (04:55 PM) 
DAMN I HAD THIS CONVO YESTERDAY... I CAN DIG THIS WRITE.. YOU DISPLAYED IT WELL MAMAS TEN EASILY....

  PROHOOD IS THE...
08/20/08 (04:26 PM) 
"more like leftover enemies turned upside down smiles smiling in faces wishing to trade places Friends?!? nah just hypocritic mud slangging loose lip hanging hoes too scared to have someone as vicious as me as a foe"---let da church say yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Hashadaramashanta radamashante

  JuztBlu
08/20/08 (04:10 PM) 
AS USUAL A DOSE OF TRUTH SERUM RIGHT HERE EXCELLENT CONCEPT AND U LAID IT OUT VERY WELL I FEEL THE SAME WY ABOUT FRIENDS IN MY EYES THEY ARE EXPENDABLE AND ARENT WORTH MUCH AT ALL LOL SO I DIGZ U TO THE FULLEST

  Shaboogie
08/20/08 (04:04 PM) 
this was dope and i am 100% with you on this because i am going thru something similar myself right noiw. i am of the mentality at this point in time with friends like mine who needs enemies and i even got a a term i am using called frenemies nice drop candy.

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