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"freestyle-baby please"
  by Saunsia


baby....
i cant even begin to describe
the love inside i have for you...
though we are not specifcally an "item"
i feel...like im your wife
you even say i am your life
so tell me
why am i
why are WE
always in a fight...
unnessecary bullshit
leaves me wit tears in my eyes...
apologies flyin...
but sometimes
not even those can help me dry my eyes...
when is it time...
to just except eachothers ways
take a deep breath and walk away
just to avoid pain...
i realize i am not always right
and you not always wrong
but we cant keep goin head up
ON THE smallest DUMBEST STUFF....
where is the trust...
regardless of the shit in my past
i still gave you trust
why can you provide the same for me
im 15
i cant handle my own self
my own buisness
i just need your support
not your worry and insecurities
i need...
for you to believe
in me...
just breathe...
and let me in...
stop tryin to perfect my flaws and except them...
and i will no longer search for flaws among perfection...
just let them...
exist...
and let us be in love.... til the end
please...just let me be me
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Date Submitted: Jul 20, 2008 (12:10 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 07/20/08 (12:34 PM)
Author: JayMoore
Poem Title: Dont Hurt Me (Freest...

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comment icon  COMMENTS (5)
  stricklyfromth...
09/24/08 (09:50 PM) 
RELATIONSHIPS ARE LIKE ROLLERCOASTERS BABY GIRL SOMETIMES YOU HAVE TO JUST HANG ON

  Bestever
09/24/08 (02:40 PM) 
this is very creative... Keep writing:)

  Quite
09/19/08 (02:29 PM) 
kool write

  Ton3
09/15/08 (02:36 PM) 
nice flow poem

  H.H. Holloway
07/20/08 (12:32 PM) 
At times, I felt as if you forced this piece just a little--nothing too brash--this isn't bad by no means--the emotions were assured and connection--the rhythm swayed back and forth as it should--just the mood of it felt a tad bit off to me at times (a little reflective and yet resentful)--this is just my opinion--however, overall, this is a very well constructed poem--HH

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