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"Free Write...(Been Gone)"
  by COMPLEX MENTALITY
  - This Poem is a response to the poem ....GONE........ by KiNg-Go0B3r


Goals already made em...Soul's already taken...Can't live half my life when tha whole thing is forsaken...Resurrection with no savin...Sleep but still awaken...Left in tha cold, and still there's no shakin...Facing battles on a daily basis, in this fucked up shit known as earth...I blame God, and my moms partially....shoulda scheduled abortion....not birth....My love told me I'm his everythin...still dnt know what thats worth....damaging myself tryna feel an emotion....even if it hurts....I realized I gotta natural high, so I quit smokin weed....higher than gravity...can't see you surpassin me...Nah, its no gassin G....Repeat after me...(I told you I quit)....Yeah nigga, I passed tha weed....Fucked, and gained a seed...mah daughter's premature..not even in labor, I can succeed....no nine months...Prayin...no good deeds...Jesus gave me freedom....I'm not freed. Locked up, but not caged...anger with no rage....*sighs* See, you wish ya enemies death and strife....which cuts like a knife...but I'll go a step further....and wish my enemies life....
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Date Submitted: Jul 19, 2008 (02:54 AM)
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  D.O.X.
08/15/08 (06:30 PM) 
***your nickname goes here*** the lines in this piece were incredible<---added an adjective

  Chocolate City
07/19/08 (03:07 PM) 
wow! that was really deep. im feelin it

  B. Rose
07/19/08 (08:57 AM) 
The ednig was hella crucial.... "bit ill go a step futher... and wish my enemise life..." <<<< damn!!!

  KiNg-Go0B3r
07/19/08 (03:01 AM) 
daaammnnnnnn u jus really took my whole thing and wooooooow haha yo im loving it mama

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