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"Colorblind Men (She is a Superwoman)"
  by B-Y


**Before you read and comment....I'm not down all the men in the world...real talk, it's just that most men in the world, do not know what they have, until they lost it..Your woman is beautiful, smart, articulate, headstrong, understanding...not just just by physical features, but their mind...their soul..their personality but yet us men know how to fuck things up and make it harder for the good men who are out there, that's why some females are optimistic now......Females, don't get it twisted though, there are some Colorblinded Women out there too....so enjoy the write....


Man, take a closer look on what you're about to lose
You have some screws loose in the head, don't press the snooze button
Wake the fuck up and see that we are hurting our women...yes OUR WOMEN
Lying, cheating, breaking hearts, empty hopes has became the female's noose
Ya hanging our good women high and dry but can 't give them a reason why
That in our eyes and our minds, we are so colorblind .....to see
The ones we call our main jewel with flaws and all,
Yet, we get stupid and can't keep our fucking dick in our draws
Wanting to sex every woman that moves, that draws your attention
Not to mention you making one hella decision...
You are fucking this up for all the few good men...well that is left of them
We....yes we are an endangered species, the Last of the Mohikans
Can you fools tell me your definition of a woman's worth?
See, a woman understands her hurtful past, know's her present state of mind
Because every good woman knows she can move toward the future than to
Dwell on the past....as a matter of fact, every now and then she laughs about
The bullshit she endured, forgives you for hurting her, but never forgets
So she can help another young woman about men like you..pussy niggas
YEAH I SAID IT....
It was meant to be said, will this poem hurt my cred?
I don't give a fuck if it does, because I hate to see our good women hurting
Going to bat for us everytime there is a screw up but instead....
We criticize our women for being to passionate, loving, caring, understanding
Yes, they love to have our attention and to listen...is that too damn demanding
Maybe I'm not understanding or being misunderstood....
Why wouldn't you not want a woman who not only loves you for you
But who would give you her all, her time, dress up sexy to make you feel good
Give you all her good, precious treasures that was above sea level
You call yourself loving God's children but got caught dancing with the Devil
You say temptation is a mutha.....but you are hurting our women...
YES OUR WOMEN YOU HURT
The cries, the depress and the heartbroken the bitter
No doubt in their mind another lesson they will have to remember
But a good woman understands that her life experiences are merely lessons
And woman enough to understand that she don't need a man to validate
The elegance that comes from inside
WHY?
Because she is so headstrong in the midst of any storm
She can endure more than any man could possibly imagine
Which draws her closer to her self knowledge and unconditioned
Self love in herself; She can make it...SHE WILL MAKE IT
So colorblind to see that we lost out on the other half of us
A GOOD WOMAN.....She is in fact, a TRUE SUPERWOMAN

**Real talk ladies.....this is for all of the females out there who has been hurt and feel that they can't overcome because a man who acts their shoe size wants to play around and hurt the most elegant, beautiful women on the face of the earth...One thing you must understand is that....Accept what you can learn to love and then let go of what you can't accept and everything will be fine...I know this because not only do I look at life at a man's point of view, but a females point as well......until then....Keep your head up ladies....



Superwoman - Alicia Keys
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Date Submitted: Dec 02, 2008 (03:13 AM)
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  im luvin me no...
12/29/08 (07:39 PM) 
you the shit!!!!i know someone that needs to read this right here....im in love all over again...how do you keep doin this to me(lol)....i cant even say no more....10 and a fav

  Isis sun
12/28/08 (07:06 PM) 
B-Y (smh)..thank you so much for inviting me to read this..thjis was written with so much love and understanding, I don't even know where to begin to quote. But (*wink*), I'll start with this: "Because every good woman knows she can move toward the future than to Dwell on the past....as a matter of fact, every now and then she laughs about The bullshit she endured, forgives you for hurting her, but never forgets.." <----that was it for me....

  soultrytongue
12/26/08 (11:15 PM) 
i can't do anything but smile to this considering my situation((you already know what it is)) and what i went through and for what?? no reason at all....this was heartfelt and it should hit home for alot of men who are very clueless of their blessings...much love to you hun... i loved it...xoxoxoxo

  KeetaMama
12/22/08 (01:52 AM) 
wow! this is whatsup! I'm loving the poetry, how bodaciously outspoken u were, the backdrop with alicia! it's all there! thats whatsup, I like!

  ~* La Princesa...
12/13/08 (09:45 PM) 
this was a real heartfelt poem-- good to know there are some good men still out there :p diggin the concept of this piece. the song and the picture you put with this complimented your write very well. Good Stuff.

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