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"Collage"
  by One


Sober brings somber
recollections/reflections
still think-in with-in
tall tales tell-in of our love
remember when it was just
you reflect-in us
mirror images mean-in
fantasies show-in
hearts be for mere mirage
man-I-fest with-in collage



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Date Submitted: Nov 19, 2008 (10:15 AM)
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  Yas
11/24/08 (03:00 PM) 
beautifully bittersweet, love the impact you made with such few words

  Jody
11/20/08 (01:17 AM) 
realities! sometimes they hwurt... love the blue background n song.

  Disoriented Di...
11/19/08 (05:16 PM) 
reminiciscing it seems...of good times and such...yea...i love the bg though...

  drybaggij
11/19/08 (02:49 PM) 
Idk, I got a lil mask wearing or like viewing the other person with a mask. Now I'm a lil off, but that's what I got from it.

  Ms. Sincerious
11/19/08 (12:07 PM) 
"Sober brings somber reccollections/reflections still think-in with-in tall tales tell-in of our love remember when it was just you reflect-in us ".. lol... yea I quoted almost the whiole damn thing, but dammit.. i just felt it that much.. and that BG seems tailored for this piece... lovely lovely drop

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