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"Cold World"
  by .Jaded Noble.


Cold World

living in a world so cold
the icy predicaments
changing all possible variables
of what we called existence

negative degree temperatures
rage tremendously on my mind
my frostbitten intellect hardly recollects
any memory of the passage of time

everything seemingly pale
as the ice entombs all
in it bitterly cold prison
I wonder..... is this living?

gritting and baring through the elements
as they pierce through frigid flesh
like spikes on harden soil
blood turning hues..a beautiful shade of blue

as my mind loses stability
forgetting all traces of you
you..the ice hurricane
flash freezing my heart

guess love doesn't exist
in a world that was cold
from the start

.jaded noble. ©2008
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Date Submitted: Aug 17, 2008 (12:17 PM)
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  Blakfiya
08/21/08 (11:32 AM) 
Damn...this took my mind places. On a macrocosm of societal issues, relations, to the most intimate ones. Cold beginning and ends. Love the blue hue line.....your write being its antithesis.

  D.O.X.
08/17/08 (10:47 PM) 
nice work....just decided to check you out since i seen that u applied to our group....ur definitely in

  --->ROXIE<---
08/17/08 (09:10 PM) 
negative degree temperatures rage tremendously on my mind my frostbitten intellect hardly recollects any memory of the passage of time <---MAN....THIS REMINDS ME OF SOMETHING I WROTE A LOOOONG TIME AGO...U REALLY FLIPPED THE CONCEPT...IM REALLY FEELIN ALL OF UR WRITES THUS FAR

  .Mase Da Rula.
08/17/08 (02:22 PM) 
I can so relate to this fam... u dont even know........ this was how I feel times ten..... very creative and imagery was on point

  Syndel
08/17/08 (01:04 PM) 
I love the energy that is put into this write I can feel the cold and the imagery is def on point very flavorful write

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