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"CLOSER"
  by LaydeePoet08
listen to soulcast


Perspiration commences
As u mention
Your feelings
And begin revealing
All your desires

Suddenly I undergo urges
And I begin...yearning
For your affection
With no rejections
And I admire

The game you sputter
Within a simple mutter
And I try not to stutter
But my...haha...flutters
With the thought of you

Passionately caressing
My Flesh like you’re a blessing
Excuse me for confessing
But im having an obsession
Hope u ain’t just messing
Around with my finesses
Cuz the throbbing feeling is getting restless
And seems to me your getting

Closer….
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Date Submitted: Jul 21, 2008 (01:49 AM)
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  kell
07/22/08 (02:27 AM) 
Closer, closer, closer.......turn the lights off in this place, and she shines just like a star, and I swear I know her face, I just don't know who you are. Turn the music on in here, I still hear her loud and clear, like she's right there in my ear, telling me that she wants to own me, to control me, come closer, come closer.........I just had th throw that in there, this was extremely hot and I'm glad you back. I love that song Closer by Ne-yo and I love this poem right here. Another poetic ma...
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