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"Citronella Extended"
  by ...Da RiDdLeR F0rT...


...Inspired By Aesop Rock...Get Underground...



…While strange days are long…

elongated hours
shower pains
concealed
by cocaine
sniffs
celebrities
shift
quit
social interactions
where
addicted realism
blurs
the reel
media conflicted
the actor
or
the reporter
so whose acting

deviant…
civil disobedience
populaces
running
rampart
pillaging
armed to the teeth
economic neglect
elect
a presidential
candidate
as synchronized
terrorist
bombs
destroy
innocent sleep

honestly…
a ballot
doesn’t satisfy
the need
of an infant’s
empty palate
when dignitaries
dine
& converse
over
leadership
politics & oil
while being
extremely
gluttonous
insipid
greetings
eating
spoiled
cesar’s salad

employ…
a chief general
to cease
warfare
tactics
border lining
criminal
affairs
the crying
disadvantaged
don’t care

poverty & famine…
barges in
no gambles to win
it just starves
the whole house
now
the underprivileged
scramble
wearing
ski masks
&
carrying
shot guns
primitive
by all means
to
a necessary
end

in a technological time…
scavengers
refusing
to allow
their bellies
to deflate thin
corporations grin
salivating
anticipating
a $700 billion
bailout
hmm
bankruptcy
&
incarceration
similar to
an aristocratic
imitation
route

desolate teens…
who decide to
increase
the educational ails
of societal minorities
contributing to
festering
descent
of high school
dropouts

ironic how…
the world
gravitates
pulling
tragedy
pushing
gravity
hard times
collapsing
stocks
crashing

presently…
who’s mad
at Martha Steward
for cleverly
collecting
cashing
a stint
currency
morally
&
ethically
not
convoluted

filtration tanks…
polluted
think
about
this
20 years ago
purchasing
bottled water
would be
considered
foolish

fannie mae…
crumbles
college loans
disappearing
tuition up
by an
elevated
percentage
breaking
limits
like gasoline
education is becoming
a slow
process
not potential
progress
for students

meanwhile…
scientists
spent
billions
smashing
atoms
the ozone is
widening
sunburn
cancerous
epidermal
erosion
killing
senior
citizens
yearly
by the thousands

…I sit….

wondering
about the worlds rationality
equality justice logic & awareness

…What On Earth Happened…

...the entire system is corrupt & careless...

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Date Submitted: Sep 29, 2008 (06:23 PM)
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  --->ROXIE<---
10/04/08 (10:11 AM) 
IMA HAVE 2 AGREE WIT ONE...I DEFENITLY GET A WHOLE DIFFERENT VIBE FROM U WIT THIS JOINT...U HELD MY ATTENTION FROM THE FIRST LINE...THESE ARE REAL LIFE ISSUES THAT U ARE WRITING ABOUT...AND IT REALLY IS FUCKIN SCARY HOW BAD EVERYTHING IS GETTING...THIS WAS THOUGHT PROVOKING TO THE FULLEST....

  Blaqmermaid
10/03/08 (05:34 PM) 
I love this title. This piece is irony and honesty at its best. A rant that oozes the realities of the ugliness of this country. This was so much to digest, yet so very necessary. Beyond well done.

  One
09/30/08 (10:15 AM) 
Damn dude....u spoke this with much conviction...well done...feels diff from you...wonderful!!!

  Blakfiya
09/30/08 (09:58 AM) 
Absolutely love the commentary, Fort. You touched upon a little of everything. I remember that summit on world poverty or whatever it was and the world's leaders dining on multi coursed meals -wasting what they portend to be attempting to fix. World is trouble...no doubt about it. You served it up in an extremely palatable dish.

  LAB **Ms. Cool...
09/30/08 (08:13 AM) 
Im not one to comment on pieces like this but this was too much of an eye opener before my morning caffeine. I can appreciate the people that dont fall for everything they read/see. We all know the media attempts cloak the truth. Some things are just too big to sweep under the bed though.

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