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"cinnamon flames III"
A 11th Wonduh and Mz Prose Collaboration


  11th Wonduh:




violated the sanctity order of carnal laws
voyeuristic ways, examining she
as she lies naked, on nature's floor
seductively engraving the apple's
core
.
exposing ripened seeds, seeds of
fertility, desirably refreshing, nature's waters
i long to taste
insatiable nature of lust, summer's night
atmospheric blueprint for
lovers
.
congenital nature, salacious viewing
passionate dissolute, distinctively tranquil, my steps
craving to be salaciously purified, immersed
w/ her waters
.
intentions are quite definitive, as the robust
aroma of cinnamon & sandalwood
delights my senses. twelve pillar candles
illuminated east & west
.
juxtaposed on her throne constructed o/vine
deceptively, leafs masquerade
exposed regions, tantalizingly painted w/ her
oil of nature
.
exquisite beauty, synonymous to frank
morrison's paintings.
queen motions me over, inflection in her voice
she demands to be serenaded
.
submit to her will & kneel & then i
seductively remove her
leaves
.
& passionately make love
in the illumination of these cinnamon
flames

  Mz Prose:

i bit his adams apple today
his brown skin inventing caramel coating
with each lick I covered his transgressions
and I know where eve went wrong
sang my sinners song until redemption trickled down my thighs
made him drink my holy water
flowing over his lips
baptizing his tongue
cleansing his pallet of any past shes
letting him be sterilized with each submerge
forgiveness bathing him with each stroke
I tend to picture him as perfection but then that would mean he is God
And
I dont take to blasphemy
but
damn he made me an unbeliever sometimes
Heaven unfolds in between our sheets like it was portable
Sitting on clouds and the one with the 9 painted on its side
is a low number compared to how
high
he
takes
me
gives me tingling sensations like a million little angels dancing on my skin
I try not to but when we do sin
Its like
cinnamon flames
and hell never tasted better
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Date Submitted: Aug 18, 2008 (11:37 AM)
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  --->ROXIE<---
08/24/08 (10:45 AM) 
THIS SHIT RIGHT HERE WAS DOOOPPPEEE!!!!! WONDUH HOMIE U ALREADY KNOW "exposing ripened seeds, seeds of fertility, desirably refreshing, nature's waters i long to taste insatiable nature of lust, summer's night atmospheric blueprint for lovers" <----CAN I BORROW THESE BLUEPRINT PLEASE CUZ IMA NEED TO SCHOOL THE NEXT DUDE IM WIT...SERIOUSLY...LOL...AND PROSE...THE WAY U FUCKIN ENDED THIS...I WAS FLOORED "AND HELL NEVER TASED BETTER" <---CRACK!!

  incredible one
08/21/08 (10:36 AM) 
was great...i like this..I'm new to the site but i like this alot...

  .Mase Da Rula.
08/19/08 (11:37 PM) 
will be back to comment.... this my shyt

  Disoriented Di...
08/19/08 (01:34 PM) 
WELL DAMN...ummm...imma just fave this freakiness and make a phone call lol...i love how you two merge in the sexiness!

  ...Da RiDdLeR ...
08/18/08 (08:13 PM) 
from the inception to the conclusion a drastic detailed account of cardinality .. of course by some of the best i've read ..this account is innocently dirty...i dig it!!

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