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"CHRIST CONSCIOUSNESS..."
  by MAVRICK


I plant my palms in the soil, creating ground from the source
My right eye vision sees the Sun, thru each house and its course
The left eye focused to reflect the Moon, energies motion is checked
I inhale thru my nose, and sense all wicked objects
My exhalation creates sensations that unwind the sublime
The lochs emerge from my dome, like telescopes from my mind
My phallic's planted in the waters, bringing life from its force
These legs positioned in prostration, affirm divine intercourse
And feet are placed in the direction of a star annouced to all
So I avoid the false projections of the star that had its fall
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Date Submitted: Sep 23, 2008 (11:30 PM)
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  bbeauty
12/23/08 (10:46 PM) 
THIS WRITE IS MOVING......THERE IS SO MUCH BEAUTY ......IN THE THINGS THAT FATHER GOD HAS CREATED.....B BLESS

  Raw Sensuality...
12/23/08 (03:26 PM) 
"I inhale through my nose and sense all wicked objects".... blessing or curse? As usal...between the lines lies the wisdom of a sage...

  Tpoet
09/24/08 (09:10 PM) 
"I plant my palms in the soil, creating ground from the source" amazing write i love it

  The Mad Poet
09/24/08 (03:45 PM) 
Very deep I like the way you laid this one out...thought provoking write...nicely done...much respect bro

  nephilim
09/24/08 (03:36 PM) 
very good write really let me use my head and think got to give it to you keep it up

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