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"chains"
  by ash_g


these chains
they're squeezin
my body,
they got me under
control,
i fight and i fight
but they won't
let me free,
so tight around my
neck,
i can't breathe.
sometimes from these
chains i wanna release,
i'm so afraid
they will hurt me.
they wrapped
themselves
around my heart,
they've put a lock
on my heart and
threw away the
key,
they wanna make
sure they'll always
keep me.
i can no longer struggle,
and no longer fight
to from them be free.
if i push them away
it'll pull my heart right
out of me.

♥ ash
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Date Submitted: Nov 20, 2008 (05:34 AM)
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  iva
11/23/08 (01:43 PM) 
nice write ash

  RUTHiE
11/21/08 (12:56 PM) 
Hmm.. im guessing these are love chains.. if so.. i can definitly feel where your comin from. good job!

  mz_April
11/20/08 (05:53 AM) 
damn ma i love this write this was great it reminds my lake one huh huh love u

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