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".:Capitivated:."
  by ShatteredSoul


All im left with are Captivated dreams
Imprisoned into my soul
Surrounded by four chambers
As scriptures of enchantment play out in front of me
I watch obliviously to all possiblities that they've cautioned against me

And I can’t [escape] this puzzle they’ve constructed for me
I Become
Held captive [within] myself
[In]carcerated -inside- my own thoughts
I am now ~enslaved~
.: Within:. two worlds which collide
now in fantasy and reality
I stay trapped
[per] plexed in the middle
Shattering myself while destroying what we had created
[Demolishing] us
I can not -think-
My mind stuck in [chaos] and a never ending commotion of screams
Only wanting - Silence – to surround me
I remain captive
Unable to free myself from this [self] suffering
Annihilation begins...
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Date Submitted: Nov 27, 2008 (09:13 PM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (8)
  Lisa20
12/24/08 (09:58 PM) 
Wow another interesting poem u take this poetry thing beyond words n into a picture that readers can vision. ten starz

  Scriptz
11/28/08 (12:27 AM) 
i like the subtle contrast of the title with the overall theme and tones of this write, dare i say it adds a dark humour to the situation...a mockery almost of the treachery. Your expression, without doubt, justifies the content with the enhancement of words for emphasis- i found it a little overdone but maybe it needed to be done to draw more attention to the meaning of words *tilts head* the vunerability in this is overwhelming! i sense betrayal foulplay, something that without a doubt most ca...
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  JokerJay
11/27/08 (11:35 PM) 
i fuckin' loved it. u open eyes

  GOD_OF_WAR_7
11/27/08 (11:00 PM) 
The dismal destruction to one's self. The amazing thing was the imagery dark painted scene. Know this feeling thouh. Awesome masterpiece............

  --->ROXIE<---
11/27/08 (10:49 PM) 
THEM LAST 3 LINES REALLY GOT TO ME....THIS WAS DOPE...U HAVE A VERY NICE WAY OF DEPICTING UR EMOTIONS...

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