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"Can't stand the pain"
  by Lara


Sad Music

So hard to face another day
Trying my best to ignore what they say
Can i just be me?
Please just for one day...
If only they knew
The struggle and the pain
That i go through
Hurting myslef and slowly dying
Who knew?!
The sleepless nights
The screams and me crying
Can they hear me?!
Even if they did
Would they try to save me?
“But no, don’t try to help me, i’ll be fine”
Actually no i need that help,
I’ve lost my shine
In the silence i lie Awake
My heart shaking like an earthquake
Pain over lapping pain
Someone please hear me,
I’m going insane
Should i freeze myself in constant pain?
I’ve been fighting this for too long
I can’t stand the pain....
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Date Submitted: Jun 20, 2008 (12:26 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (3)
Date: 08/22/08 (10:11 AM)
Author: Living Legend 2
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comment icon  COMMENTS (49)
  D NYCE
12/17/08 (09:40 AM) 
serious emotion, you connect it to everyone with your words... i know i feel like this quite often, but when i decide to come out with it... lets just say i hope its as emotionally charged as this one lol ten stars ma- NYCE

  ShatteredSoul
11/27/08 (11:29 PM) 
omg ma. its like you discribin me in your write!!! isnt it sad that you must hide urself from the world jus because their to naiive to understand how you really are.? i mean the ignorance that ppl carry is crazy!!! mama if you ever need someone to hear you out i promise you im hear my ears wide open ready for anythin :D. nicely done!

  L.P.
11/24/08 (03:50 AM) 
wow the poem is deep as hell very emotional i was about to cry and ish reading it lol nah just kidden but very nice piece i try to stay away from piece such as these because i dont want to get sad i tell you this tho i can relate. and can you please tell me where can i find the songs that on this play list i love the violin.

  Bestever
11/20/08 (11:19 AM) 
i feel ya on this one lara...

  Docc
11/12/08 (10:21 AM) 
damn ma dis was sumthen ill keep it up nd always keep ya head up fo a brighter day na mean

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