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"can't move on"
  by T Do RPT


I cry myself to sleep
Where not together and
The love is so deep
I thought we were going to be
But he tuned the other cheek
Love him so much I will do anything
So he can speak to me
Hoping he will call so we can go
To the movies, leave schools early
Or walk around in the mall with me
But he left me for this ugly chick
Now he is walking with her in the mall
I never felt so used I see why one
Of his last chick changed to a due
I can’t give my new man my heart
cuz you ripped it apart
I think I should stay single cuz of you
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Date Submitted: May 16, 2007 (04:25 PM)
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  PoeticSoulja
11/14/07 (09:40 PM) 
Damn thats real touching..You feel to hurt to get into another relationship because you got hurt so bad.Keep up the good work mami.You getting nine stars for this one.I gotta check out some more of your material

  Will charles
08/27/07 (01:39 PM) 
Very sad emotinal write. really feelin it, 10 starz.

  C_sexy1
06/05/07 (04:31 PM) 
I like it to

  MoniLove
06/05/07 (04:25 PM) 
I been here b4....man.....this is nice

  doe boi
06/01/07 (04:12 PM) 
IM FEELING YOUR VOCAB IN THIS ONE CAUSE YOU STAYED TRUE TO THIS NIGGA THEN HE DROPPED LIKE NUFFIN THATS COLDER THEN ICE BUT ITS JUST THE WAY SOME NIGGAS BE AND IT AIN'T MUCH OF NUFFIN YOU CAN DO TO CHANGE THAT BUT MA DONT LET THIS NIGGA END YOUR SEARCH TO ACHIEVE AND RECIEVE LOVE CAUSE ALL NIGGAS AIN'T THE SAME MA ITS SOME OF US THAT REALLY DO KNOW HOW TO BE FATIHFUL AND TRUE AND TO LOVE A WOMAN RIGHT START TO FINISH

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