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"Candle Opera"
  by Tpoet


Deep down in depths of my soul

lies something so great

it's like a Rorschach test

engraved in my mind

Like a crimson sun neurotic at best

it's a disembodied euphemism

primitive human emotion

love uncontrollable in itself

until embraced by the passage of the eyes

pass the heart to the pit of its being

Soul searcher

mind boggler

joy bringer

pain pleaser

knowing we shall return tommorrow optimistic

of its presence

the one flame we will repeadly and willingly be bunt by

like the candle wax

sliding down the side of that favorite

Candle Opera sitting in the window of love
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Date Submitted: Aug 27, 2008 (12:16 PM)
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  BlessedOne
11/29/08 (04:29 PM) 
Something like a bubbling well of inspiration and hope. "Candle Opera sitting in the window of love."

  BIG CHIEF
11/29/08 (10:20 AM) 
i like this because you expressed so much love about yourself inspiring your audience .giving the mood in the write a good vibe to read about....great write

  Snickaz
11/29/08 (02:55 AM) 
damn..short but it conveyed so much power...so much depth within this short text...i was feelin this. it was deep...you made the visuals easy to see and deeply described at that...

  BoySoDef
11/29/08 (12:32 AM) 
wow...very powerful

  Quite
08/28/08 (04:08 AM) 
wow speechless lol

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